| "Family Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: BeyondTheSoul On: November 19, 2006 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! it's so frigging funny!! plz continue it!!
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Reviewed By: qwuint On: November 08, 2006 14:17 CST
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Its great so far. I'm interested in finding out how the taishoe's get ahold of nyoko without getting hurt.... severly...:P
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Title: xD
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story... plizz update sooon
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Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Buwahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! I almost fell out of my chair laughing over this chapter! Kagome fessin up on where exactly Inuyasha's penis has been! OMG! My sides were achin! And when I hit "KLONNNGGG" I totally lost it and started cackling like a loon! Please please don't stop writing, this story or any other IY hilarious and fantastic stories you can think of! I love em!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... fluffy with a subjugation spell... and what means tsuppari? I think that shippo spent too much time around Miroku... who would have done what he did? maby it was just instincts, but still
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: September 25, 2006 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo - "Those ungratefulpuff boys! puff They never puff come to puff see me! And after puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff all puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff I puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff went puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff through to have them! Still funny! Shippou fixated on Kagome's breasts? Now who's gonna believe that? snort More like, who wouldn't believe it? Will lovesick boy ever find his mother's look alike? Or will he start sneeking peeks of his mother again? Or wil he just ask Shippou to transform for him? All these questions answered in the next episode, when we hear Sesshoumaru say, "You want 'Fluffy'? I'll show you 'Fluffy'!" To which Kagura replies... Ahhh! You'll figure it out!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 13:12 CDT
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again me! Nyoko is now in a weird situation... how is supposed to scare a naked akamaru? please update soon... this is getting intresting... [grabs popcorn and stares at the screen]
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Title: You have a sick mind
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru cleaning himself. full body shudder That was NOT a pleasant image. laughs Got to watch out for those zippers. This is still a great story. Reminds me that I have to get off my ass and write another chapter to mine. sighs Maybe I'll get to it today. Here's a thought: why not bring back Kikyou's ass? Or have them go talk to it. I'm assuming that it is still stuck in the ground over that earth youkai geyser. And now: Will lover boy find his mate before the swelling goes down? Will her swelling nightmares be conquered by her love of his swelling? Will Kagome and Inuyasha ever slow down (not likely!)? Stay tuned for the next thrilling chapter when we find out if the anal brothers confront the enema. Take it easy, Fyrloche.
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Title: busted!
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 05:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fluffy is gross! how could he do that? eeeww... and those three are really evil... doing those things to Nyoko... and what do the Niagara Falls fit in all this? Please update soon... I need to understand that part!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
those three are evil!! evil evil evil! I don't like them... Akamaru, Midoriko and Aoimaru better find her quickly... really good please update soon!
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Reviewed By: blackwidow10 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 22:23 CDT
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exactly how many sequels are you doing? :P i like the idea of narrating the kids' lives as well as inu & kag's. the characters are great. i'll be laughing about this the rest of the night (don't get a big head, it's only 34 minutes to midnight :P).
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Title: Release the hounds!
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the hunt is on! Will lovesick boy find pregnant girl before she explodes? Will pregnant girl fall for anal boys lies and let them turn her baby into gasp that most nefarious villian, Naraku? Or will she see that they are full of fertilizer? Will Fluffy get a Tetsaiga enema? All these questions and more answered in our next thrilling episode! LOL Sorry, my friend, I just couldn't resist. Well, here is your measly review. It's still good. The story is shaping up nicely and now that you have mentioned Miroku and Sango's descendents, you will have to bring in a slayer, a monk, and Kirara. Of course, who says that it has to be a female slayer? Or that it has to be a monk; it could be a miko. And somebody has to be a leacher and since this is modern times, why not make it a woman? Equal rights and all that. Aaahhh, the possibilities are endless! I await the next chapter with baited breath. (Just what does that mean, anyway? Does that mean I've been eating worms or something?) See ya', Fyrloche.
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Title: luv it!
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 05:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it love it love it!! Its really fun to read ans i enjoy it. when are you going to update? please do it soon!! [puppy eyes] ¬¬Im adding this to favourites...
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Reviewed By: desha On: September 03, 2006 00:11 CDT
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great story but where are Fluffy's kids
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Reviewed By: Lady Jay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 21:29 CDT
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wait, I didn't know you read Freud... ;)
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