| "Family Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Marukireicho [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 22:22 CST
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Well, I hate that it's ended, but...I loved it. I think--and I hate to say this, since I'm a girl--Kikyou's ass was the funniest part about her, thus being the only thing I actually liked about her.
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Reviewed By: bobalui On: February 19, 2007 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know
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Reviewed By: CobaltStarr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if you know this or not, but Chapter 1 reads the same as Chapter 10. This probably isn't right, so would you please correct this glitch? Thanks! :)
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Reviewed By: Esperanza On: January 06, 2007 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! nice update! Hope to read more soon. Will you write another story after this? -Esperanza
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Title: baby naraku...
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if naraku wasn't that evil... I would also think that he would be cute as a baby... and who is the strange woman?? Because I already think I know who she is... if she is who I think she is... please update soon!!!! a very pretty please, by the way...
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Reviewed By: Esperanza On: December 15, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor akamaru... xD I'm still laughing at what fluffy did to yashy... ¬¬ I want MY digital camara fixed... please update! This is geting intresting...
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Reviewed By: BeyondTheSoul On: November 19, 2006 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! it's so frigging funny!! plz continue it!!
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Reviewed By: qwuint On: November 08, 2006 14:17 CST
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Its great so far. I'm interested in finding out how the taishoe's get ahold of nyoko without getting hurt.... severly...:P
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Title: xD
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story... plizz update sooon
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Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Buwahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! I almost fell out of my chair laughing over this chapter! Kagome fessin up on where exactly Inuyasha's penis has been! OMG! My sides were achin! And when I hit "KLONNNGGG" I totally lost it and started cackling like a loon! Please please don't stop writing, this story or any other IY hilarious and fantastic stories you can think of! I love em!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... fluffy with a subjugation spell... and what means tsuppari? I think that shippo spent too much time around Miroku... who would have done what he did? maby it was just instincts, but still
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: September 25, 2006 05:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo - "Those ungratefulpuff boys! puff They never puff come to puff see me! And after puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff all puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff I puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff went puuufffpuffpuffpuffpuff through to have them! Still funny! Shippou fixated on Kagome's breasts? Now who's gonna believe that? snort More like, who wouldn't believe it? Will lovesick boy ever find his mother's look alike? Or will he start sneeking peeks of his mother again? Or wil he just ask Shippou to transform for him? All these questions answered in the next episode, when we hear Sesshoumaru say, "You want 'Fluffy'? I'll show you 'Fluffy'!" To which Kagura replies... Ahhh! You'll figure it out!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 13:12 CDT
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again me! Nyoko is now in a weird situation... how is supposed to scare a naked akamaru? please update soon... this is getting intresting... [grabs popcorn and stares at the screen]
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Title: You have a sick mind
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru cleaning himself. full body shudder That was NOT a pleasant image. laughs Got to watch out for those zippers. This is still a great story. Reminds me that I have to get off my ass and write another chapter to mine. sighs Maybe I'll get to it today. Here's a thought: why not bring back Kikyou's ass? Or have them go talk to it. I'm assuming that it is still stuck in the ground over that earth youkai geyser. And now: Will lover boy find his mate before the swelling goes down? Will her swelling nightmares be conquered by her love of his swelling? Will Kagome and Inuyasha ever slow down (not likely!)? Stay tuned for the next thrilling chapter when we find out if the anal brothers confront the enema. Take it easy, Fyrloche.
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