| "Avalanche - White Danger" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 22:25 CST
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STUPID, U MADE ME CRY & U PROBABLY AREN'T EVEN GOING 2 FINISH THE STORY!!!! *sobs & crys* I just want 2 read the rest, please don't let Davis die, it wud just b 2 sad. I like Davis, there r times when I just want 2 hug him. Please finish the story, u got me n2 a very depressed mood. L8r. :'( Bye *goes back 2 her depressed crying*
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Reviewed By: CHILD_DRAGON On: May 16, 2003 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
nevermind just have kenyako,daikari,koumi & taiora |
Reviewed By: CHILD_DRAGON On: May 12, 2003 03:18 CDT
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PLEASE POST YOUR NEXT CHAPTERS PLEASE!!I ONLY LIKE DAIKARI KOUMIMI DAILEI & TAIORA |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 05:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats soooo sad.....but out of all the stories u'v wrote so far I think this one is my favourite. U really let people see the Davis inside...scared and lonely |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 02:08 CST
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That's sooooo sad... *sob* |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very good. Plzzz continue. I have 2 know what happens 2 my Dai-chan. I just luv him 2 itty bitty pieces |
Reviewed By: Dukect On: November 30, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is great story please contune |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 04:56 CST
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Good fic, you got everyone in charactor. |
Reviewed By: Q22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 17:01 CDT
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get working! |
Reviewed By: Q22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 17:01 CDT
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get working! |
Reviewed By: Q22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 17:01 CDT
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get working! |
Reviewed By: Skywolf On: August 18, 2002 19:09 CDT
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Daisuke is my favorite too. I can't wait to see how the families take it. But Kari? Yeach. 'm just not her fan. Still, you do a decent job relaying her personality. I hope you post soon. |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: July 05, 2002 18:46 CDT
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FINALLY!!!!!!! You have updated!!!!!! You posted this on ffnet? I would've thought i would have seen it!!!!! HOW strange!!!!!!!! I LOVED your story!!!!!! As ALWAYS keep it up!!!!!! How sweet you made Ken think about Miyako!!!!!!! Jumps up for joy at the thought!!!!!! Go you go you!!!!!!!! Sorry I'm high on chess right now and I'm VERY hipped up!!!! (You know what I think I read that on a fic somewhere!!!!! I just can't remember where!!!!!!) HEHEHEH!!!!!! Well KEEP it up!!!!!!!! Get updating SOON!!!!!!!!! In amd out!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: June 19, 2002 12:37 CDT
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Cute!!!!!!!! Write MORE!!!!!!!!! I love kenyakos AND I also LOVE kaiyako's!!!!!!!1 (Have NOE clue where that came from!!!!!!) I read your fanfic a LONG time ago!!!!!!!! And thought it was GREAT!!!!!!!!! I was surprised that I didn't leave a review though!!!! I almost ALWAYS do!!!!!! Well write more kenyakos or kaiyako or just Yolie related fics kay!!!!!1 THANKS!!!!!!
Blondie~*~*~*~*~*~*~ |
Reviewed By: Isabelle On: April 24, 2002 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its VERY good!!!!!!!
plz right more!!! i HAVE to know what happens!!!
u r a talented writer! : ) |
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