| "Cheating Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Reviewed By: mookaball [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 14:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome! I usually read it on fanfiction but I saw it here too&&figured...WHY NOT REVIEW HERE TOO! L0l. Anyway, yes I loved it and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter ^-^
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 05:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really nice, congratulations! I hope you update soon. I'd like to see more Inu-Kag romance! :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 07:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awww Inuyasha is such a wimp lol should have told Kagome :P and LOL Miroku did good XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 14:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the blind date went well for sango & miroku... what's next for inuyasha & kagome though... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 03:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo i had to re-read this again :P its been awhile since i last read this :P and OMG Inuyasha is soo more matured now... DUMP KOGA AND GO FOR INUYASHA!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome needs to rethink her relationship with kouga... interesting that inuyasha was trying to give her some advice... kagome & inuyasha seem to get along whenever they're with their daughter... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: loved it so far...
Reviewed By: mima On: January 25, 2009 23:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the storyline, it was creative and not too entirely far off from the actual characters. the pairings of people within the plot worked out really great as well. i'm hoping to see more of inuyasha's family show up soon because it seems like that'd be a good installment of some sort of drama. after all, they don't know he has a kid yet from what you've written. i also enjoy your description. that's something i myself struggle with as a writer and your research is pretty good. alot of authors don't know anything about the background they give their character (referring to all the medical and school stuff you put some effort in elaborating on) you do have alot of typos, some of which i could overlook but others confused me while i was reading. i know it might take alot but try reading over it before you post it. it took me a while to stop relying on spellcheck because it doesn't look for everything. sometimes a correctly spelled word that can be considered grammatically correct will be overlooked overall i thinks its pretty great and it pulled me in right from the prologue. great work! hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Love your story! Keep it up!! but i hope this isn't a Kagome/Kouga fic. Hahaha. It seemed like that at the beginning of Chapter 12. But i could be wrong. Haha. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 21:42 EST
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this is great, i cant wait until inuyasha tells his family that he's a daddy
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 08:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is still trying to get used to inuyasha being with ami... nice that inuyasha is trying... what will happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Luckylove On: September 28, 2008 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you must continue with your story i looove it please finsh
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Title: weeeeee
Reviewed By: Serena122189 On: July 17, 2008 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happens NEXT lol write moe soon
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW im in love!!! really in love ^___^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that ami is fine... would be interesting if inuyasha & ami think of a way to be a family with inuyasha getting together again with kagome... wonder what will come next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:58 EDT
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poor kagome. she isn't use to sharing her daughter with her father. i am glad though that ami wasn't hurt. inuyasha is showing his usual jealous self when it comes to kagome dating kouga. great chapter. update soon
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