| "Sex Education" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: not so innocent On: May 07, 2008 08:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
so good. i love it. just some sweet loving after school.
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Title: d-chan
Reviewed By: bZducky On: February 16, 2007 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) me like!!! d-chan here because b-san is somewhere in lala land. It's really good. I totally support Kei/Kur. Read some of my stuff if you're into fullmetal alchemist. im posting up some yuyu hakusho later...i heart lem-lim-citrisssss
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i hace to say is wow. it was really well writen and the characters were great, it was descriptive and creative. i do have to say it's amoung one of the best i've ever read. it was, i need a good word for this great and orgasmic! beautifully written, i couldn't stop reading it and i do have to say this is the longest review i have ever written.
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Title: mukaebi
Reviewed By: Mukaebi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 02:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
On just a brief scientific note, some women don't feel pain because some (like myself) are born without the barrier mentioned. Anyway, for a first fic about a characters first time, it was quite accurate. The way sex is depicted in movies is totally wrong. The uneasiness between Keiko and Kurama is what really made it believable...Kudos to you! Just watch out for the few minor spelling and grammer errors I noticed. A few words were stuck together likethis and often times you forgot to use quotation marks which made the dialog hard to find within the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! one of the best i have read, so innocent but...not ^.^ i love your writing, & i'll be sure to check out any of your other work. ^.^
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Reviewed By: starrchild [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
better than i could have done, thats for sure! It was absolutely enthusiastic(if i spelled that right^_^)
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