| "Foerever And A Day" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Larina On: September 04, 2006 03:39 CDT
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This sounds really interesting. I'm curious how the Kikyo/Kakashi thing will go. Kagome can be with either. I can tolerate Kikyo when she's not evil.
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Reviewed By: neko_cat_kirara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 20:35 CDT
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put er wit naruto
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Reviewed By: rETszrzdxtyrteres On: September 03, 2006 19:15 CDT
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I do not like Kikyou that much but she deserves to be happy. Kakashi is a suitable person for her, i suppose. I can tolerate her in a story if she is on the same side as Kagome(evil or not). I really want Kagome to be paired with Sasuke but can you put in a little Itachi/Kagome just for the heck of it!
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Reviewed By: serenity1920@aol.com On: September 03, 2006 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great story so far, it has a twist to it that makes it different from other stories that I've read. You have a few grammar and sentence structure errors; but overall, I rated the story a 10 for originality. You should do a triangle with Sasuke/Kagome/Itachi Update this soon.!!!
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Reviewed By: Sadow15nsisry On: September 02, 2006 19:59 CDT
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I may not like Kikyo, but I feel sorry for her...She should just finally be put to rest...I think that you should make it a Sasuke/Kagome pairing, and possibly work in some Kagome/Itachi into it as well? I love both pairings...=3
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Reviewed By: darknesschild [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 16:51 CDT
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Oh! Very nice. ^_^ And I have never seen a Naruto/InuYasha crossover, where Kikyou goes with Kagome. Usually Kikyou is the evil bad person, and somehow runes stuff. Also I agree with you, I'm not a Kikyou hater either, it'd be nice to know that she was put to rest, happily. Anyways, I think you should maybe make it a Sasuke/Kagome pairing. I'm in love with that pairing! ^_^!! And I think this should be a very good fic, your fics always are good. :P I'll be waiting for more, and hopefully soon you'll update!
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