| "Child of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: February 01, 2007 17:38 EST
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I forgot the review last time because i was lost for words...and thinking about how will kai and hilary get back together cause it seems like they're getting closer and hiary's not killing him for being atleast within 10 feet of her but it's still a funny chapter and milo did deserve to be dissed by gou.
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Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: Kai adn Hilary fun means love On: February 01, 2007 10:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story like omg, the beginning when kai lefrt was so sad... but now i just omg i hope you updata it soon because this story is just amazing and really funny that sounds like kai. just to get jelous over a playboy-guy you know ... LoL... anyways i really do hope you updata this story soon i enjoyed it a lot.... keep up the great writtin'. love yeah bie bie
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Reviewed By: annonoumous7 On: January 27, 2007 09:35 EST
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Excelent chapter, you could probly set music to it. Wundering where these ideas for stories come from.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 23:04 EST
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am i like....late? but anyway...YAY!!!!!! AWESOME CHAPPIE! oops.....stupid caps.....anyway yeah youve gotta continue! and i gots the feeling talas gonna spy on milo and hilary. im so psykic lol. but anyway. take your time dont hurt yourself. and ill be waiting...*bum bum bum buuuuum*
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Title: JOY!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: January 02, 2007 15:49 EST
Comment/Review:
Awsome! I'll shut up from now on. you have outdone yourself in this one! it's too amazing for words! my e-mail is LadyAmazon14@aol.com
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Reviewed By: anonoumous 7 On: December 31, 2006 19:04 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for posting so close to the hollidays. If I may, I recomend making the chapters longer. and spacing there posting dates, this has a general affect of a more addictive reading experiance. The chapter was still great :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:04 EST
Comment/Review:
Oops! Sorry for the spelling error I wanted to type cant but it turned out as xant. Hilary.*_*
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow its such a awesome story I just love it and I xant wait to see what Hilary is going to tell Kai,please update faster. Hilary.(My name's also Hilary by the way:)
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Title: please updata soon
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoy this fan fic ... i mean it ... it is one of the best, not only is the story good but you made the characters have the same characterstics just older and easier for older teens to find comedy out of a child's tv.. haha, please keep goodin' i really love this story... luv yeah
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Title: yay!!!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 16:22 EST
Comment/Review:
yes bed is a good thing. i love the chappie!!!!!!!! i expected more yelling but the way you did it was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! are kai and hilary gonna get back together? or am i just gonna hafta find out? lol. hope you update soon. but ill be patient. 'cause im cool like that. :P
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Title: on the edge of insanity
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: December 20, 2006 17:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Hi, it's your deranged fan girl. i was wondering... DID YOU DIE?!!! I CAN"T WAIT ANY LONGER!! EACH CHAPTER GETS BETTER AND I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! I'M VERY IMPATIENT. sorry didn't mean to flip. it's just i love this story.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's one of the best stories i've read. Just update soooooon.
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Reviewed By: anonymous 7 On: December 07, 2006 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IV read a lot of fan fics, comented on the good ones, and this most definitly has my attention, and is excelent if i might add, plz update and y the x rating, PG-13 would of ben suficev. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: bum bum bum
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:59 EST
Comment/Review:
i would have reviewed yesterday but.....i had to go to bed....anyway....i was kidding about being mad. lol. and ive got a feeling Kais gonna get burned by hilary (with word of course lol)
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Title: ooohhhh
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: December 06, 2006 18:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh-oh! kai's in trouble, hilary's come up to burst his bubble,yeah yeah, Uh-oh kai's in trouble, hilary's come up, quck march n the double,yeah yeah. Awsome, oh well, like, totally, freak me out i mean right on! cause you sure are number one! yay
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