| "Child of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:04 EST
Comment/Review:
Oops! Sorry for the spelling error I wanted to type cant but it turned out as xant. Hilary.*_*
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow its such a awesome story I just love it and I xant wait to see what Hilary is going to tell Kai,please update faster. Hilary.(My name's also Hilary by the way:)
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Title: please updata soon
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really enjoy this fan fic ... i mean it ... it is one of the best, not only is the story good but you made the characters have the same characterstics just older and easier for older teens to find comedy out of a child's tv.. haha, please keep goodin' i really love this story... luv yeah
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Title: yay!!!
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 16:22 EST
Comment/Review:
yes bed is a good thing. i love the chappie!!!!!!!! i expected more yelling but the way you did it was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! are kai and hilary gonna get back together? or am i just gonna hafta find out? lol. hope you update soon. but ill be patient. 'cause im cool like that. :P
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Title: on the edge of insanity
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: December 20, 2006 17:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Hi, it's your deranged fan girl. i was wondering... DID YOU DIE?!!! I CAN"T WAIT ANY LONGER!! EACH CHAPTER GETS BETTER AND I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! I'M VERY IMPATIENT. sorry didn't mean to flip. it's just i love this story.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's one of the best stories i've read. Just update soooooon.
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Reviewed By: anonymous 7 On: December 07, 2006 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IV read a lot of fan fics, comented on the good ones, and this most definitly has my attention, and is excelent if i might add, plz update and y the x rating, PG-13 would of ben suficev. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: bum bum bum
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:59 EST
Comment/Review:
i would have reviewed yesterday but.....i had to go to bed....anyway....i was kidding about being mad. lol. and ive got a feeling Kais gonna get burned by hilary (with word of course lol)
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Title: ooohhhh
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: December 06, 2006 18:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh-oh! kai's in trouble, hilary's come up to burst his bubble,yeah yeah, Uh-oh kai's in trouble, hilary's come up, quck march n the double,yeah yeah. Awsome, oh well, like, totally, freak me out i mean right on! cause you sure are number one! yay
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Title: OMG YEAH!!!
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 16:46 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy i love this story please keep updatin' it ... it really really good ... teehehe i love it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristy On: December 05, 2006 16:17 EST
Comment/Review:
lol, i'm glad you liked it ^^..you better update soon =P
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Title: *tear*
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 18:15 EST
Comment/Review:
i loved it!!!! it was so sweet!! kai finaly has a kind of relationship wit his son! YOU ABSOULUTLY MUST CONTINUE!!!!! if you dont ill be mad.....j/k
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Reviewed By: KristyHimura On: November 24, 2006 08:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY a new Chapter ^^ w00t! wtf kai is going to take Chou NOOO Don't you get in truble Kai...Kai: Hn, he is my kid i have rights to take him if i want. But kai that isn't fair..you need to tell Hilary. [lol just poped in me head.] I hope you update soon it's it's like Thanksgiving ^^ oh PS HAPPY TRUKEY DAY TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY ^^ - Kristy_240
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Title: yes!!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: November 23, 2006 14:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's supercalifrajalisticexpiaidocious! the chapter of this wonderful story certainly wasn't atrocious! i love the way gou talks it's so kawii!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: November 21, 2006 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me again and i love it so much! i tell my friends about this and they love it and hope that kai does get to know his son. i was crying when he an past kai and that gou is scared of him.
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