| "Child of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: anonymous 7 On: December 07, 2006 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IV read a lot of fan fics, comented on the good ones, and this most definitly has my attention, and is excelent if i might add, plz update and y the x rating, PG-13 would of ben suficev. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: bum bum bum
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:59 EST
Comment/Review:
i would have reviewed yesterday but.....i had to go to bed....anyway....i was kidding about being mad. lol. and ive got a feeling Kais gonna get burned by hilary (with word of course lol)
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Title: ooohhhh
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: December 06, 2006 18:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh-oh! kai's in trouble, hilary's come up to burst his bubble,yeah yeah, Uh-oh kai's in trouble, hilary's come up, quck march n the double,yeah yeah. Awsome, oh well, like, totally, freak me out i mean right on! cause you sure are number one! yay
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Title: OMG YEAH!!!
Reviewed By: Kasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 16:46 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm so happy i love this story please keep updatin' it ... it really really good ... teehehe i love it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristy On: December 05, 2006 16:17 EST
Comment/Review:
lol, i'm glad you liked it ^^..you better update soon =P
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Title: *tear*
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 18:15 EST
Comment/Review:
i loved it!!!! it was so sweet!! kai finaly has a kind of relationship wit his son! YOU ABSOULUTLY MUST CONTINUE!!!!! if you dont ill be mad.....j/k
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Reviewed By: KristyHimura On: November 24, 2006 08:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY a new Chapter ^^ w00t! wtf kai is going to take Chou NOOO Don't you get in truble Kai...Kai: Hn, he is my kid i have rights to take him if i want. But kai that isn't fair..you need to tell Hilary. [lol just poped in me head.] I hope you update soon it's it's like Thanksgiving ^^ oh PS HAPPY TRUKEY DAY TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY ^^ - Kristy_240
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Title: yes!!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: November 23, 2006 14:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's supercalifrajalisticexpiaidocious! the chapter of this wonderful story certainly wasn't atrocious! i love the way gou talks it's so kawii!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: November 21, 2006 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me again and i love it so much! i tell my friends about this and they love it and hope that kai does get to know his son. i was crying when he an past kai and that gou is scared of him.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 22:09 EST
Comment/Review:
complete and total awesomeness! i feel so bad for kai! having to see Gou in the arms of some other man
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Reviewed By: KristyHimura On: November 16, 2006 12:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i love it ... It's takes you some time to get these chapters out i understand but if i were you i would write them during class when i have nothing to do cuz then it would be eazier to type ^^ i should make a pick/banner for your story if you like. KristyHimura ~aka Kristy_240 [didn't sign in]~
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Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: November 12, 2006 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my godess! you gotta stop playing with me! i dieing over here!! everyday you keep me waiting about what's going to happen next. but please keep going, you have my vote all the way.
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Title: omigah
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 11:19 EST
Comment/Review:
that chapter was amazing! it almost brought tears to my eyes! you must post the next chapter soon!!i wanna see his reaction
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Title: im back
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 23:04 EST
Comment/Review:
im back and ive read the chaps i missed....they are AWESOME!!!!! you must continue! for your fans sake
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Reviewed By: Kristy-240 On: November 02, 2006 08:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love your stores and i have you on my fav auter list ^^ and your story Child of Mine is a great story i wish that you could get the next chapters out faster but i understand with school and mess going on around you.
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