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Reviewed By: LadyCobain69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Fic! It is the only fic I grow excited for as I wait for the next chapter to come out! Don't give up I LOVE it! The story is much more original than the twenty other crappy fics people put up everyday! Plus, you can frickin' spell! No one else seems to grasp that concept... Kudos on the fic! Keep on writing (you're good at it!) ;)
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 22:07 CDT
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i love the story keep it up plezz i can't wait till the next chapter
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: December Love 05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love your story. I am currently going through drama with my mom and dad. Let's just say I can't wait until I turn 18. Anyway, yourstory is really terrific. I know how you feel, think that your writing for a select few people. That's why I've given up writing. I really love the story, but I'd understand if you give it up. A story this great isn't getting the credit it deserves. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK!!! December Love 05
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Reviewed By: kitkat505 On: August 05, 2007 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realllly like this story and i don't think you should stop, it was really sad when souta died...and storys that can make you cry apparently mean that they are well written. Its really getting intersting with kagome and inuyasha and its definately in my top 5 stories xo kitkat
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Title: All chapters
Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 15:15 CDT
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I read all the chapter at once, I really enjoy this story, I can see Inuyasha falling for Kagome and now she needs him more than anything. I´m waiting to see if they wil get closer ... if they will start haveing feelings...Inuyasha already has, but Kagome...You are doing a great work here. Congratz!
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Title: The Unexpected
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: August 05, 2007 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic.it shows that not all the characters have to one way or the other. please countion on write for this fic i can not wait until they find the person that kill her little brother. how the relship will for kagome and inuyasha.you are doing a good job to me.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story a lot but hate to update SO IT DOESN'T MEAN I DONT LIKE THE FIC, your in my favourite author list and i do have very few favourie author. i read every fic u wrote!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 15:44 CDT
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I totally liked it! I imagine that would be extremely hard for her. I'm amazed she didn't start balling...I probably would have broken down a long time before Kagome. I'm excited about the car though it might not tell them much it could still be a huge help. :)
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting really good. Hm...I wonder who that person behind her was. Well I guess I'll have to find out next chapter, ne? :)
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 10:49 CDT
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This story just keeps getting better and better! I'll be waiting for when you're done with you're other stuff to work on the story again! But owww why does Kagome have to be soooo stubborn?! LOL!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 04:26 CDT
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that was good, aww why doesn't kaggie-chan like yashie. he's so cute, i wish i could kiss him. The fact that her emotions are running wild and she's trying to make sense of things its tough, but i would have taken his offer blow off some steam and then have beautiful sex with him.or a quicky
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 17:59 CDT
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OMG! He KISSED her!!!!!! YAY! I LOVE InuYasha and Kagome fluff! Please hurry with the next chapter! I'm soooo excited! I wonder what's going to happen next to them after that...awkward moment.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 12:42 CDT
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Hey who kiled their parents, and why did they leave for so long and came back. Does Bankotsu know anything. and is it going to be akward between inuyasha and kagome since they kissed and they both liked it. And is kagome gonna stay away from inuyasha , and is he gonna ask her about it and persue her.
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Reviewed By: Anaidil On: June 17, 2007 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!I really like where you are going. It surprised me when Souta was killed but this makes it more interesting because who really killed him? For all we know it could be that stalker kid but I doubt it's so easy, there must be someone else so keep the excellent work I'll be waiting on your update to see how it continues.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 17:59 CDT
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awwww that made me cry.....
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