Reviewed By:ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:20 CDT Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Pretty good...a few spelling errors, a couple of grammar corrections (but I have read much worse...lol). Otherwise a good plot. I like it so far. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Reviewed By:star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:44 CDT Comment/Review: awesomeness!!! i totally love it so far. some advice though. If you start a new paragraph when someone talks it is a lot easier to read. Ok well keep up the good work byez.