| "A Fragmented Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: kiwi711 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 10:56 CST
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It's so close to the end! I'm axious to see how you end it... please update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 21:24 CST
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noooooo *cries* why did u stop it rite there...noo....thats just torture!!! But ok, anywhoo this chapter was AWSOME!!!!. please please add more!!!!
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 19:25 CST
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its taking so long to add a chappie.....
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 19:25 CST
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its taking so long to add a chappie.....
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 20:54 CST
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Omg this was awsome!!!!!!!!! Luv this story!!!!! UDATE UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 18:10 CST
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yay your going to start writing again!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
please update
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 14:02 CST
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whooo i luv this story...finally one tats not about sora and riku together
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Swordstuff [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Temari92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 14:52 CST
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Okay u have 2 keep writing!! Please i love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 673 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!!!! You HAVE to keep writing!!!!. You don't want all the people who have read this to be in suspense forever do you? Besides, just because they didn't review, doesn't mean they haven't made yur stroy one of their favorites. I have a story that only has like 6 reviews but that doesn't stop me from writing! ~Akira-sama~ Ja ne
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 22:41 CDT
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Hey I never got the chance to read the fanfic yesterday but today is a new day. Anyways I like the summary and I think that it'll keep me entertained.
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Reviewed By: Swordstuff [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKay the end kinda confused me when Matty laughed and Sora whinned about being tired. HIS GIRLFRIEND WAS JUST KIDNAPPED!!! I would have thought he, being Sora, would rush in recklessly and end up kicking everyones ass. Acctually it would be better if Riku did that cause Sora sucks and Riku's awesome. I think you should kill off Sora in the end. that would be hilarious! You probably wont though so.... CONTINUE THE STORY ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Swordstuff [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
From what ive read so far, the only thing that drives me insane is that Riku's Blade is called Souleater, which you find out for sure from Kingdom Hearts Chain of Memories, Riku's side. Please don't be offended I'm just really mad when people spell the names of swrds wrong cause I LOVE SWORDS! Everything else is spectacular.
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: kiwi711 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 08:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it so far! Post the rest as soon as possible please! ^^
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