Reviewed By:Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 23:29 CDT Comment/Review: Ok its not a bad story...but you could put alot more detail into it....I don't write fanfiction but I read alot....and I don't want to sound like an evil person....just so ya know its a good plot I just think you could explain things more and give reasons as to why she disapears all the time...and the fact that she was thirteen when she goes back to the past and is aparently an adult because Sesshy is and adult and they where kids together....and ....what about her friends...that doesn't makes sence they just disapear from exsistance....well...I just though I would say that...On a more positive note this story has alot of great potental, and I can honestly say out of the meny stories that I have read not one befor this one has had a character go from the past to the present back to past then back to the present it a fade in fad out way while also going from a America to Japan....Trully your the first which makes in Unice......XD............Nyuka
