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Title: Freak out :D
Reviewed By: Ruminative-Be [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2013 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I decided to reread this after so many years. And I love it even more now than I did then! I see my old, childish review now and smile. Bwaha. But seriously, I couldn't get my hands off it until I finished it. And even now I'm itching for more. My mind is rumbling for more of this story! |
Reviewed By: xXakuXrokuXx On: July 07, 2012 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm up to chappy three so far, and I have to say I'm really enjoying it. The curiosity factor is building nicely, and I have to wonder what you're going to throw out in the next chaps. Question: Is it weird that I feel like Miang and Ramsus were based off of Alice Cullen and Jasper Hale? Sandy blonde, twirling-dancey movement... I don't know, maybe it was just the way I interpreted the moment. =3 |
Reviewed By: Miss Shepherdess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 13:48 EST
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I enjoyed this fic a lot. It has made for a pleasant week for me. Coming home from work was extra nice since I knew I could relax with this story. I loved the contrast between the Grotto and the Garden. The time that Axel spent in the dim grayness was wonderfully written. The despair, anxiety and monotony of the place was wonderfully palpable, and when they switched to Radiant Garden, it was heaving a huge sigh of relief. I really wanted to know what happens to the characters, you managed to keep me interested. Perhaps the characters were storming out of rooms in huge emotional turmoils a little too often and the words "slightly" and "seemingly" were over used, but other than that, I'm glad I read the fic. :)
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Reviewed By: Y On: June 02, 2008 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is terrific! I read it before, a few months ago, and now I've read it a second time... ^_^; Why haven't you started the sequel yet?!?!
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Reviewed By: XeveraX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 18:19 EDT
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Awesomeness! When are you writing the sequel? It's way past February already! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Ruminative-Be [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 07:27 EST
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Oh, and yes to the sequel. Definitely hanging on it. I'll be waiting till February then :) Enjoy your writing break!
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Reviewed By: Ruminative-Be [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 07:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant closure to the story. Roxas is a little too rude but you managed to blend it all wonderfully. Axel's love-confession was very sweet, honest and extremely canon. Though the epilogue was a little confusing, I guess it's supposed to be like that. Everything'll make sense in the sequel anyway, haha. PS: I've never had blueberry muffins before. I ordered 2 yesterday along with a nice big chocolate chip cookie and when they arrived at the table, I promptly devoured them while swooning, make-believing that Vincent made the muffins and Aerith baked the cookies. XD My sister thought I was crazy but, whatever. Your story made my first blueberry muffin consumption a great pleasure :)
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Zaxel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 02:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!! Fantastic update! I very much enjoyed it! -starts to do the Demyx jig- :D Honestly, I think you should do a sequel! Wanna know why? Because you're an awesome writer! ^^ Really, I would like to see an adventure with Axel and Roxas. And I also would like to know who were the rulers of Gaia's Grotto! SO... I'm thinking that has something to do in the next fic? And what about the rest of the Org? Will they be saved too? Dah! Now you got me all excited! Besides... Angst does the soul good! xD Well in any case, I hope you do decide to continue and make a sequel. Zaxie would be more than happy to read! :3 Like always, keep up the great work! You are an amazing writer! I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope to see it soon!
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Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 20:16 EST
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That was a great chapter yet again, and i cant wait until the next one. I was so very happy when they were reunited. How you used suspense was great, when Axel was pleading to Roxas i was constantly on my toes! A sequel sounds so amazing for this story, i know i would read it. >_< i would honestly cry if Vincent or Cid died though. Please write the next great chapter soon i cant wait to read it, and hopefully the sequel. I really enjoyed this story and my enjoyment grows as the story does, thank you for writing such a fantastic story. your loyal reader anime_lover_kohaku
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Reviewed By: Ruminative-Be [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 07:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, the chapter's here! Anyway, fantastical job, as per usual. Very sweet yet realistic chapter as the characters were so well written. Let me go put on a hat so I can take it off to you and Desperate Reflections. Whee!
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Reviewed By: ichiwings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 23:29 EST
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I love this story! I love how you portray the characters! I love the plot too! Please update soon! cookies for you!
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 02:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god that was beyond amazing! It has been so long since i have read a fanfic and i must say returning with this one was such a treat! I love Vincent and Axel's relationship, the trusting yet teasing and witty friendship is so very enjoyable to read. I must say i am so happy that Roxas will return soon and that the plan with the Way to Dawn succeeded. As always the writing was amazing, the entire time i found myself holding my breath to see what would happen next. Especially with that frustrating yet very well done cliffhanger you put at the end of the chapter. Oh and before i forget i must tell you that i loved the part where Cid gave Vincent his military tags again and told him "no forgetting" it was sugar coated sweet, tid bits such as those really get to me, as i am a romantic at heart. It was just SOO CUTE >///_< i really want Roxas back! after reading the cliffhanger i was like O_O WHAT HAPPENS?!? DOES ROXAS REMEMBER?! ARE THEY TOO LATE?!?!, questions ran and even now run through my brain) Thank you for updating and writing such wonderful stories. your loyal reader anime_lover_kohaku (im back and here to stay ^-^)
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. *SQEEEEEAL* This is the best beyond best fanfiction I've ever EVER read!!! I can't stop grinning stupidly every time I think of it. And I've even taken to babbling to my brother about it. Minus the yaoi scenes cos he's.. my younger brother. Please update asap!! *grins stupidly again*
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Reviewed By: Zaxel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 06:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is getting sooo exciting! I cant wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the amazing work! I'm staying with this fic until the end! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Hitoshirezu On: October 03, 2007 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually saved all the chapters up to chapter 11 (or 15/16?) and I read them all in one shot because once I started I couldn't stop. And then when I got to the end i was like "WHAT?!" and I'm very happy you'd written the next chapter lol You absolutely must continue with this story. It's very interesting, and the plot is something that drew me in. As a fellow author, I give you so many props. There are a few things that you might want to elaborate on, like Axel noticeing the other Organization members in Gaia's Grotto, but otherwise, i think this story is brilliant, and I've fallen in love with it. I can't wait until you put up the next chapter!
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