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| "The Little Things In Life" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer On: October 06, 2006 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done. Not quite there yet, seeing as you keep on mis-spelling your bad guy's name. It's s-a-s-u-k-e. Remember that. Write it on a post-it note and stick it somewhere visible. Because enough of that mis-spell can get annoying. Other than that, you still have my attention.
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Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer On: October 03, 2006 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. Excellent work in characterization. Sasuke truly is a cold bastard. Good ninja, poor social skills. He got what he deserved, and I liked that. That said, finish this, ya dork. I will be watching here for more.
| Reviewed By: inu youkai Ashiyame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! THIS IS SO GOOD SO FAR! FINALLY, Sasuke gets what he deserves for being such a jerk. *giggles* So yay! I've become quite interested in the NaruSaku pairing lately, and your fanfic is one of the best of the NaruSaku fics I've read so far. So please don't forget to update! This is going to my faves, and I'll be sure to constantly check back for updates! ^.^
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