| "From Demons to Dementors" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Title: hey... um....
Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: October 28, 2006 20:29 CDT
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yeah, um i'm sorry if it bugs u that i post 1 review per chappie... (it just now hit me to tell oyu this) if it bugs u, tell me and i'll try to stop... well, i'll REALLY try stop and i apologize if i ever forget(if you mind, that is... which i hop u don't!)
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Title: chap 6
Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: October 28, 2006 20:26 CDT
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HERMIONE? Souta's "love" is hermione? ...why didn't i think of that earlier? ...NO! now i have to wait for my next... uh... i mean UR next chapter! ...T-T *glares* u WILL update soon and u WILL like it! (hopefully this "soon" i speak of is tomorrow...? and hopefully you'll love me enough to multi-post a day...? *puppy eyes*)
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Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: October 28, 2006 20:19 CDT
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wow... kagome's mom is REALLY avtin like a bitch... disowning her daughter and everything... *whistles* wow... o no... i only have one more chap to read before i have to wait for an update... T-T ehhh... NOOOO! i REALLy hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: AllMyGlory On: October 28, 2006 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's quite good so far . . . But I do believe you mean "okaa-san" and "okaa" when you write "okka-san" and "okka." But one question . . . wan't Kagome' mother happy when Kagome first arrived home? So then why is she acting like a stuck-up, no-good, I'm-better-than-everyone, conceiting bitch? I suppose it will all reveal itself, ne?
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Title: chap 4
Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: October 28, 2006 20:01 CDT
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gr8, gr8, gr8! I can't wait to read the next chapter. buit i'm still in the dark as to why kagome's so down on herself... though i'm sure everyone else is, 2... or at least for now. did kagome do something in the past? dis the inu gang died and shes blaming herself? ...wait, is kagome a killer? i hope my Qs are anwered soon as i read! ~_~
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: October 28, 2006 18:56 CDT
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Okaa-san means mom, but I have no idea what okka means. Nothing in Japanese though, since you can't have double k's in a word.
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Reviewed By: chap 3 On: October 28, 2006 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i finished chap 3! still a little confused, but i s'pose that just goes with everything. i can't wait to read chap 4! Update as soon as possible!
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: lilomeinthecorner On: October 28, 2006 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
k i read chappy 2! :) what happened? Tell me, tell me, tell me, TELL ME! it's good so far and i'm really enjoying it! :) I'm killing myslef by writing a review in between each chapter, but i can't help it, i just gotta tell you what i think of every chapter. Update soon and when is the HP group gonna come in?
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: Lilomeinthecorner On: October 28, 2006 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only had a chance to read chappy 1 so far. great job so far! :) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Evangeline_Lily On: October 28, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh . . . interesting, I've got to say. A bit different than most x-overs, I have to admit. Update, I suppose. (Since I'm kinda curious now)
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Reviewed By: ytytdyt On: September 17, 2006 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome
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