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| "Taking the Revolution" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Wow
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will admit, I was a bit squicked that you gave Utena a dick, but as your story progressed, it seemed to make sense, especially with her unique, convoluted bond with The Prince. The world of Utena is crazy on its own, and if girls can turn into cars, girls can turn into boys. When I began to think of that, I began to think your idea was a lot less "out there" than what the director himself has formulated. But still, it is a bit nutty and it took a lot for me to warm up to. Other than that, the writing was good, the idea was original and creative, and you do Kozue well. The smut was very good too. I do have a minor criticism though...there seems to be a strange formatting problem with a ton of underscores within your entire story. I don't know if you intended to do that, but it really detracts from the flow of the story. Otherwise, nice job.
| Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
| Reviewed By: BlueDolphin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2002 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...
well, i'm split. half of me wants to write one scathing flame, just because i'm not usually one to read this sort of fanfiction in the first place AND because you dared messing with utena in such a way. but, then i stop and think about it and realize that that isn't very good grounds for a flame because i have nothing to back it up with, other than the standard 'what i say, goes' response.
having said that and attempting to put all biased feelings aside, i think it was very well written. you did kozue justice, even if the subject matter was a little...out there *sweatdrop* utena seemed a little off, but i think that if i were in her position, i'd be acting a little bit off myself.
other than that little bit...i rated your fic high on style because of the simple fact that it didn't skimp on details. spelling/grammar speaks for itself. originality/creativity is also high, because the subject matter was...definitely unique ;c). i didn't enjoy it much...but that's just 'cause i don't read lemons usually. and...that's that.
having read this, i'm afraid to think of what an evil clone of myself would write..but good job, eyewrin ;c) |
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