| "Through the Furnace, Unshrinking" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: January 26, 2007 21:16 CST
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Excellent story, pacing and writing. Can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 17:05 CST
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I really like this. It's very dark, which I'm not usually a fan off, but you've managed to draw me in, which definitely says something about your writing. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: yetinmic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 03:48 CST
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Wow when things happen it all explodes question is what will Gael do now and how will this effect Duo, Wufei and Heero's relationship with eachother. Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie (not logged in) On: January 16, 2007 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHHHHH!!!! What's going to happen?! Please write soon.....how can Heero just shut himself off like that? Dont let anything happen to WuFei!
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Reviewed By: dami On: January 10, 2007 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing read - I'm just enjoying it so much! I really only come to MediaMiner for a few fics, this being one of them. I find this story original and creative with a wonderful insight into the characters. It's also very well-written, with a dark gritty edge that I find thrilling. I'm a lazy reviewer, but I had to leave a comment after your last chapter blew me away - you really dug into Heero and Fei's characters! Fei is also my favorite g-boy and you really do him justice in this story (no pun intended...) Anyway, good job and thanks for a great read :)
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Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: January 08, 2007 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can Duo DO this to Heero????? I'm so upset!
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Reviewed By: sun_falling On: January 05, 2007 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. The boys as hustlers in the city are well drawn and developed. Your writing style is smooth and easy. If I had one suggestion, it would be to speed up the plot. Much as I enjoy watching their relationships blossom gradually, I really feel like the boys are still in stasis, just hanging around talking and not really moving. All the same, I love this story and I'm really glad you wrote it.
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Reviewed By: tinkering On: December 23, 2006 18:39 CST
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I hope you plan to complete this...it's a riveting read
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing stuff. It's always good to see Q with some backbone. Poor Trowa, though., I don't see much hope for him.
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Reviewed By: Kwoug On: December 17, 2006 17:29 CST
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Great Story! I really like where this is heading! So excited for the next part!
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Title: Yum yum UPDATES!
Reviewed By: KrystalFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 11:24 CST
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I was looking forward to a new chapter and you definitely didn't dissapoint. Keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Br On: December 11, 2006 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I had wondered, but looks like you had it already planned and I jumped the gun just a bit *sheepish grin*. Another wonderful chapter. Looking forward to more. And thank you for listing your pairings. It is very much appreciated.
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Reviewed By: LouiseJohns On: December 09, 2006 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah! You tell him, Trowa! Drag those slimy sisters through the mud, Quatre, they deserve it! Better yet, get them arrested for selling their brother (slavery's a capital offense, isn't it?), so they go to jail and learn what it's like to become someone's whore themselves. Plus Quatre could then get the money that's rightfully his to save his liver! Awesome awesome. Looking forward to the next chapter. And I hope they still go after Dick and get him, the bastard.
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Reviewed By: yetinmic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 15:02 CST
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Poor Quatre guess all the gboys will have to think of what to do now. I can't see the others letting him confront his family or Gael by himself. Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: KrystalFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 22:45 CST
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Favorited. Keep up the great job. I'm loving the direction this fic is heading and you've got me drooling for more.
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