| "My Life as Hinata Hyuga" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
Reviewed By: dororokun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S SWEET!!!!! Go naru/hina! What happened to Mayu liking gaara? It's like you got rid of that. But I really like it. Keep it up! :)
|
Title: WOOOOHOOOO!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 19:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I HAVE THIS FEELING MAYU IS GONNA SEE GAARA. I HOPE SHE CATCHES UP TO SASUKE AND BRINGS HIM BACK... UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: i dont know On: May 26, 2007 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon. Please make Mayu more useful other than her humor antics but I love her character. By the way, your making Sasuke abit Out of Character. And I wonder what happened to Mayu's attractions to Gaara? It's like you just bashed it and then moved to Sasuke...That's all, but all in all, I like it.
|
Title: OMG
Reviewed By: miura-chan On: May 26, 2007 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG ITS SOOOOOO COOOOL! I LOVE MAYU'S ATTITUDE!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
|
Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY COWS!!!!!!! THT WAS SOOOOO GOOOD!!!! plz update soon!
|
Title: funnyness
Reviewed By: seiko92 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are the best story i read on this story sauke and her miss intruping thing like i can't wait to sleep wih u funny
|
Reviewed By: Mickey16 On: May 01, 2007 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic...it's so hilarious!!!!!!!!! I wited impatienty 4 chapter 12.!!!!! Keep em comin
|
Reviewed By: Siekuto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You brought out Mayu's pesonality very well. I loved the Banana dance,(perhaps a references to Family Guy?)I made me laugh. I like how you use Mayu's knowledge of the Naruto series. Very subtle, but effective. Keep it up. Regards, Siekuto.
|
Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Moon_Angel8 On: May 01, 2007 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
so...mayu and sasuke are definetly together! why did itachi kiss her then!??! Is he in some kinda love?? That Natsuki guy better back off... And also, did Kakashi plan the whole getting drunk session??
|
Title: are you going to make more?
Reviewed By: Dororokun On: April 29, 2007 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're very good at writing, but I'd like to know. WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO MAKE MORE? And are is Mayu going to find out more about her past?
|
Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! I am hooked but you do have a few grammer mistakes...But its still really cool! Please Continue!
|
Reviewed By: thank you On: April 13, 2007 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Powow, you are stupid. You are one of those people who don't notice grammer errors. Its a great story, but there were alot of grammar errors. She is also posting this on other sites, your just a crazy person who doesn't do anything new. So basically, half of what you wrote is a lie. This story is good though. Something I would like to see is a sasuke mayu kiss.
|
Reviewed By: Powow On: April 11, 2007 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you thought about posting in other sites?/ Really because this is good!! A lot of people like Hinata so they would probably find it unsalle (sp) at first but once reading they will get hooked. Can't wait until you update again!!
|
Reviewed By: Powow On: April 11, 2007 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad that you have update! Every time you do it brings joy to my being!!!
|
Reviewed By: tyes On: April 05, 2007 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so good, i saw a little grammer errors in it though. work on that.
|
| Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
