| "Out of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
| Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
Title: yay!
Reviewed By: kierasama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! it was one of the best i have read! good job!
|
Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: kierasama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting beginning. i look forward to the rest of this story.
|
Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story in one day I am surprised of myself.But anyways excellent story I loved it.I almost cryed at the end and then I read the very ending AWSOME STORY!!
|
Reviewed By: saygoodnight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 04:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED Miroku's excuse. That was so brilliant.
|
Title: wow! this one was interesting! i REALLY liked it!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu in school? PRICELESS! Miroku in modern times (y did i keep imagining him trying out to be in porn...my poor addled/hentai thoughts...for SHAME! lol!)...and it was all a dream, huh? u got me GOOD, Sue!
|
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 12: It's the eyes, isn't it. The moment Kioshi (?) looked away, Sango was embarassed. And the moment Kagome looked into Yukio's eyes, she got all flustered. It is the eyes - it must be.
|
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter Eight: I like the Shiori/Sesshomarou pairing. It fits them, that Sesshomarou would fall for a pretty face. More than a pretty face. Shiori's pretty sharp.
|
Title: Another great Fic
Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 21:52 CST
Comment/Review:
May have just been filler but it was still great. Keep up the great work, I really enjoy reading your stories.
|
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story. I liked Sesshoumaru's sons, they are fun, and I liked the subtle miko powers. One thing, at the beginning Miroku said Sango left her Hiraikotsu in the past and then later she had it on Mt. Sorrow. Granted, it was all a dream and such things happen in dreams, but it seemed like an inconsistency. I also liked that Inuyasha was good at math; people often make him really stupid.
|
Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats left to say? Another masterpiece of the best writer on the net. :) Looking forward to the next story.
|
Title: Excelente
Reviewed By: Ayano_56 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa the story at first i thought was not that different but once I started reading I just got so hooked I couldn't stop reading till the end. Keep the momentum going in you. Continue giving us more of your prolific and one of a kind masterpieces and works.
|
Title: great point of view!!
Reviewed By: Carochan On: October 19, 2006 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I started to read this fic and was so caught up by it, you know for shure how to tella story but what surprised me the most was the ending, not the epilogue, and thinking about it, i guess it may not be that diferent from the real inuyasha manga... i mean have you seen the last chapter, kikyo is dead (for real i guess) naraku ha sthe entire jewel and the last demon they killed had the hability yo read mind and it stoped when he read kagome's (why maybe 'cause she was thinking that she couldn't die there, she is the only one that can purifu the jewel now) wow i didin't realized this until i read your story you're SO wonderful!!!
|
Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great ending to a great story. I'm glad everything turned out alright. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the good work!!
|
Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shocked* Now, I figured as much that she was going to die, but I just didn't realize it was going to be true. How sad. Great ending, though. Great story. Poor InuYasha. Finally someone to love and she happens to leave him. Again, great story, but a very surprising ending for the story.
|
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, it's weird, I didn't get the notifications that this story was updated. Ah, so Naraku has finally resurfaced!
|
| Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
