| "A Romp Through Time" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: Love Your Two Part Story!
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, THIS is the kinda story they should write for teen romance (well, sorta. I mean, since the characters are teens and all. Though it may be a bit above teen rating, so no.). But the plot, little that there is, and the characters, and so well written! I hung on to every word (whih wasn't hard at all to do, mind you)! I especially like Koga and Ryoga's parts in here. They're so funny (though weird about girls in every way)! This being the sequel, I HAVE read "A Romp in the Park", and loved it first (the first three sentences are actually referring to it, not this story, though technically, the second and third sentence refer to this story too). Since you seem to be intertwining them a bit, I decided to just make one review. So much easier. Keep on writing! :) sincerely, seacil
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is comming along great. You are very talented. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Daert On: April 15, 2007 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of the best writers that I have encountered.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 00:03 CDT
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The interactions between Kouga and Ryoga are... very, very funny. And Ryoga's emotional roller coaster had me cracking up. Poor boy needs some prozac or something. Great chapter. Looking forward to more...
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:58 CDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im hooked you cant quit ;)
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 00:31 CST
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I like this.. a LOT. I liked Park too, but mediaminer is iffy about letting me review for some reason... Anyway, I'm looking forward to more! I love Ranma/Inuyasha crossovers... very fun.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 17:50 CST
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Squashidly? *snerk* Poor baby. The shopping expedition put me in mind of Joan of Arc at the mall in Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure. At least Sango didn't beat up an aerobics instructor. It's gonna be fun to see what the fang boys get to see when they easedrop on our heros.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed Sango's enthusiasm for shopping for everything but clothes!
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Reviewed By: Crazed one On: December 22, 2006 23:37 CST
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this latest chapter was good! the only thing that bothered me was that Ryoga was adressing Akane like he was a butler or somthing!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 11:53 CST
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It is really cute story you've got going on here. It's got an intresting plot. I really like the humor. Keep up the good work. I look forward to your updates
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 20:44 CST
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Loved Kouga having trouble with the branch!
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Reviewed By: Crazed One On: November 13, 2006 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to put Sango and Kouga together? cause that would be fun to see! Great job on what you have written so far.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 16:57 CST
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I'm guessing the nice human rough and tumble girl is from Nerima.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Great Please hurry and update
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