"Confrontation II: Trials and Tribulations" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 11:00 CDT Comment/Review: No way would I even attempt to push you to update. Good things come to those who wait! And you always deliver. You set up S/M & S/R for some nail bitting. Will Sango give in & reveal the bug up her butt? Will Rin confess her fears? Will Sesshy get over himself long enough to give his mate what little she asks? NAH! Too soon any of this..must have more angst! And we cannot forget Inu & Kags. There is some major problems just below the surface, any knowing how Kags can push, it's going to erupt. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 09:45 CDT Comment/Review: oh boy with that last sentence i feel a fight coming on...dun dun DUN...but yay...thanks for updating it sure has been a while but yay go miroku...cant wait for the update on that little trist...so please update soon...oh and can we have some more kagome and Inuyaha drama...please...your so good at that Please and thank you
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 18:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: poor rin. she's only human sesshoumaru! wow, what an amazing chapter! really sad with the whole rin thing. well thank you so much for updating! can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 20:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! Good chapter, but that was an awful cliffie no matter what you say! LOL. That conversation between Rin and Sesshomaru is a dangerous one. This is one time where action DON"T speak louder than words. If Sesshomaru is not willing to give Rin the words she needs, to truly understand his wife's human heart, he stands to lose her. This is really good....but really sad. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:25 CDT Comment/Review: ACK! I need more!! I'm falling in love with this. Confrontation must be jealous of it's successor. Really it must be. Terrific Job so far! Update soon. Love, Ao.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 17:09 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow, that was worth waiting for. i'm am so excited for the next chapter! thanks so much.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:47 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: EXCELLENT chapter. The situation with Sesshomaru and Rin is just heartbreaking. I really hope that she finds the courage to tell Sessh the truth next chapter. He asked her directly what was wrong; she just needs to be brave enough to tell him the whole story....and have enough faith in her mate to realize that he would listen and believe her. I can see how that would be intimidating; Sessh still has problems expressing his emotions. But, this is one time that he may have to. Rin sounds suicidal here, so he's going to have to express how much he loves her...before it's too late. As for Kagome and Inuyasha.....I really hope he reconsiders his decision. Kagome loves him so much....and he has no right to make such an important decision without even explaining his reasons for it first....or even telling her that he's even made the choice at all! Both Inuaysha and his brother are adorable....but they are going to lose their mates/wives if they don't get it together. Terrific story.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 17:11 CDT Comment/Review: Your wonderful...Keep up tha great work, cas I am dyim to know what InuYasha is gonna say to Kagome when she brings up what a great father he is gonna make, and I cant wait to hear this lil talk that Miroku is gonna have with Songo, and what Renito is gonna do to Teela.....And last and most importantly, what Rin is gonna tell Sesshoumaru!!!!! Please please update soon, oh great great fan fic writter^_^-HCDK
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 09:51 CDT Comment/Review: Well done! So much was said without actually saying it. This is the set up for some major shit hitting the fan dead center...the previous shit just winged the fan. The state of Musashi; the state of all the couples(no one has the unrealistic fairytale relationship which is BORING); the state of the Western Lands. You are the master & this chapter was well worth the wait!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 00:12 CDT Comment/Review: oh my god that was so sad and romantic...such heartwrenching words that it is amazing how you write it all together...ah...*sighs*...amzing work and i cant wait for the next chapter
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Title: AHHHHHHH Reviewed By: Shyla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 19:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i have never been in love with a story as much as i am this one. PLEASE! KEEP WRITING!!!.. Its amazing!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 22:21 CDT Comment/Review: Wow! That was great! I swear, Sesshoumaru is so freaking brilliant, Susamajii was so scared... hahah... hope to read your next chapter soon!!!! Good Luck
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 12:59 CDT Comment/Review: That certainly threw Susamajii off-kilter! The rotten bastard! So much going on! What's happening in Musashi, what's up with InuYasha & Kagome, and with Miroku & Sango, will Sesshy wake the heck up & realize what his cool veneer has done to Rin? So many questions! Thanks for the update! Oh, and more please! :D
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:29 CDT Comment/Review: awwww...poor rin...i cant wait for the update...u have so much going on that one chpter isnt enough...so please update soon...i really liked this one...can u also update on kagome and inuyasha relationship and how that is going as well...that would be nice to know since she is also going through a hard time as well thanks good luck
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 14:18 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good chapter. Sesshomaru definitely gave that jerk something to chew on. I wonder what he's going to do with it..... As for Rin....that scene was painful to read. Sesshomaru had really better get in touch with his sensitive side fast. Rin's words and actions were ominous. And unless he wants permanent damage done to his marriage, Sesshomaru had better let go of some of that pride of his and admit to his mate that he loves and needs her. The price of holding on to his pride will most assuredly be more than he is willing to pay.
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