| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story u must update soon and i mean really soon!
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 13:37 CDT
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This goes for the entire series so far: Excellent story, great way to write. Keep going, me and a couple of friends want to see what happens to Hinata, Kouden, and co.!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 23:42 CDT
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I knew it Katoki is Naruto and if e isn`t have did he get the same scars Naruto got and also Kakashi knows he is Naruto and now I take it Hinata is going to have another kid the thing is I don`t really like Sasuke but I love how he got on Katoki`s case lol and Icann`t wait till I read what Tenten does to Neji for not telling her Hinata was still alive lol oh well keep up the great work and update soon heck it seems like your the only one who is updateingoh well
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Reviewed By: I am JuanCarlos ng On: March 07, 2007 18:09 CST
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Never mind, it came back...sorry for the bother...^^
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Reviewed By: I am Juan Carlos Ng On: March 07, 2007 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to Chapter 26?? I read it and printed it, and it was good and funny!! I loved it...^^ Well, what happened?
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 13:44 CST
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I thought this chapter was pretty good I was kinda confused to why Hinata slammed the door shut until this chapter and now I am wondering who is it now that seen Hinata was it Teten or Anko I cann`t remember who else went with them oh well I just hope that youwill UPDATE soon
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off damn you for making such a great story. i have been siting at my computer for the last 6 or 7 hrs reading it. this story rules!!! and it makes me sad that you might not be able to update til the end of feb. well i hope the next chapter is as great as the rest. can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 18:29 CST
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so when is naruto going to be back to normal and regain his memories?
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more it's so good!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 18:13 CST
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That was a pretty good chapter I like the idea that kouden told hs teammate who his real parents are ok okand now I know the leader`s right hand or was it left hand man is actaully a woman with child but now the 2 questios I have is who is this leader and what is his plan to do with the child when it is born wat is he planning to seal a demon inside the child god it is kinda fun trying to guess what is going on lol oh well keep up the great work and update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 16:52 CST
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Ok I have a question I know you said Katoki isn`t Naruto but i`m not sure about that for some reason I have been thinking what if Naruto didn`t die but some how split into two ppl and those 2 ppl are Katoki and the leader of this bad guy group the one I kept asking you about and got no reply because didn`t that one woman in the group say that kouden kind reminds her of there leader and the leader has red eyes what if the leader is the fox demon and Katoki is the good half thats just my opinion and to me it kinda like it could have happened please reply to that because it is really bugging me to know if I might be right heck e-mail me if you want because I know our not going to say it because it might ruin the ending maybe but I got to know please let me know lol
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 16:42 CST
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Well that chapterwas pretty god but the part where Hinata to me seem to be wanting sex from Katoki but now with this chapter I am kinda confused you say Katoki isn`t Naruto but when Sakura tells him he kinda reminds her of Naruto and then he has that attack and he tells Hinata what he can remember were sounds of screaming and didn`t Hinata scream when her dad stad Naruto with his sword and with this pairing your making of Hinata and Katoki the only way I will like it is if he really is Naruto and that sucks that Kouden missed the mother who doesn`t want him toknow she is still away oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: fartmasterking [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 14:55 CST
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AWESOMENESS!!! I love it! Keep it up, if you do finish, make a seconed. PLZZZZZZZZZ
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool!! Anyways, even though you said that Katoki isn't Naruto, I still think that Katoki could actually be Naruto!! ^^ I love your story, and now...I wish i had a baby fox to take care of!!! ^^ Thanks for writing this awesome fanfic for all of us!! Well, keepup the good work!! ^^ Anyways, I everyone (including me) to stop asking questions that "might" ruin the story...Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 11:49 CST
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This was good I still hate the idea of Hinata falling for Katoki and I still wish somebody would kill him anyways I am glad that Kouden has this baby fox to cheer him up since his mother seem to me doesn`t want by makig him think she is dead I know Naruto didn`t have any parents because they were actually dead but what is her excuse what because she doesn`t nobody from her home village to know she is still alive so she just abanden hers and Naruto`s son just so she can be with this smooth talker somewhat look alike Naruto oh well update soon and keep up the great work
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