| "The Shadow of the Past; The Light of the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nequam_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful job though the writing didn't see to have enough feeling as i have hoped. though the introduction could have gone a little more smoothly-this very nice!
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Reviewed By: Yamiaaliyan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I've read a few of your Fan-fics but never actully knew what to put...so here it gose...i love the creativity in here ^^ keep it up, i love reading about all of the fun adventers and cant wait to read more of your work...all i can truly say is that this hads been one of the meany fan-fics that i just wanna read over again ^^
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 15:02 CDT
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Ooh I like the way you did that...bringing the modern day Atem back and the explination was well thought out, I'm impressed. I have to admit I also enjoyed the interaction between the rest of the group prior to Yugi and Atem's return. (Thanks for letting us know what happened to Anzu)...Overall I enjoyed the story and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:27 CDT
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Wow love these latest chapters...I'm glad that Atem's going back to Yugi's time with her... I wonder what the gangs gonna say when they see the Pharaoh? can't wait to find out....
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 22:16 CDT
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I love the newest chapters!!! Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 09:42 CDT
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NO NO NO! What have you done to poor Atem? What's Yugi gonna do in the future without him? Is she going back or staying? Will she be happy?It's a good couple of chapters though I'm glad Atem was able to find seto and that Yugi was able to help rebuild everything. *shakes head* poor poor Atem what did he do to deserve this...
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 16:42 CDT
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Me likey--what a chapter!...Giggling Goddesses,Zorc defeated, Atem off to find Seto...but then what? I can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 16:30 CDT
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Aww man...not another cliffie! oh well... gotta say I loved this chapter the banter between the two Atem's was great, shame the modern one had to disappear he will be back though won't he...I suppose we'll find out soon! see you soon
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 00:13 CDT
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I love this story!!! I love the new chapters!! Can't wait to read the next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 14:37 CDT
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Oh now your just being mean...
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 14:10 CDT
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Wow girl your on a roll! Good chapter I do like it when the 'future' Atem and Bakura interact it never fails to produce a smile...Do we get an account on what happens to Anzu? *evil grin* see you soon
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 09:34 CDT
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NO,NO,NO, Don't start with the cliffies! A good chapter though, but did you really have to leave it there?, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DragonAngel of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 03:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great new chapter!!! Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another good chapter from you...and quickly too *I'm just teasing ^_~ * You know the more I read the More I hate Akhenaden, what a jerk! but still I suppose every story needs one (jerk that is). I look forward to reading the next bit and don't forget NO PRESSURE! whenever you're ready.
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 08:46 CDT
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woohoo! an update... just kidding. I know you must feel guilty but stop apologising you did warn us and say there would be a delay as you were using the manga and waiting for the next issue...we'll wait. Got to say I like this chapter, It's a nice idea to give us a chapter dedicated to the present with Atem and Bakura interacting, plus Atem finding out who was responsible for Yugi going to the other school and it's about time you know who got what's coming. See more from you soon...(no pressure!)
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