| "You're Joking, Right?" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 17:33 EDT
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Ah, glad to see more of this. Thist latest chapter was pretty intense, and I don't just mean because of the sex (though that was pretty damn hot). Wonder if Aya's really going to walk away from his time with Yohji like this unaffected...
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray for your return, you have been sorely missed. Yet another terrific chapter. Complex characters, incredible sex, and best of all, more revelations realistically woven into the chapter. Poor Aya, so willing to be torn apart based upon a promise of eventual vengence. Fascinating revelation of his early relationship with Brad, and so painful not only how that turned out but the many other incidents with people other than Brad, Farfarello and now Yohji. At least part of Yohji, if not the part to which he is much listening in this chapter, has some understanding of the danger he is in. I hope Yohji will be able to find a way to help Aya.
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Reviewed By: Monachos43 On: July 27, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this fic-it is so good. Your characterizations are awesome!
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Reviewed By: RS On: July 27, 2007 01:13 EDT
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OOOOOOHHHHH, *yeah* !! Love the mind fuck as much as the literal act...maybe I'll root for Yoji yet.
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Reviewed By: RS On: June 01, 2007 00:57 EDT
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Time for a little update, perhaps ? Remember your loyal audience and have a little pity on those of us who have no life but wait for your stories... Oh yeah, nice line about Aya tears. Maybe I'll wind up pulling for Yoji on this one anyway...
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Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 04:33 EDT
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oh wow great fic! three thumbs up, that is if i had another thumb. very confusing, in a good way. i never even thought i'd read through a fic with violent sex in it, but i did, not because i suddenly liked violent sex, but because it's well written and well thought out. not gratuitious at all, at least not to me since the sex scenes seem to me to be important to the story and the character development. what's more, this fic is funny (well, the humor bobs in between the angry and the thrilling), and has some of the wittiest one liners i've read in a fic for a long time. great job, looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed (too lazy to sign in) On: May 09, 2007 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Especially the whole originality factor. I couldn't (and still can't, really) figure out what was going on with Aya and Schwarz until the scene actually spelled it out, and I'm in flux trying to decide who Aya is going to end up with eventually. This isn't your everyday run-of-the-mill fanfic, and I love it to death. I love all your fics! Keep it up! :D
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guh. Getting more and more engrossing! Pretty interesting, watching the different layers to Aya and wondering how far Yohji can see into him.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have so looked forward to this update, and my overwhelming response is simply wow! Poor Aya, so overwhelmed and with so much unfairly being demanded of him. Such a cruel call from Schuldig, but perhaps doing as Crawford demands is just what Aya needs after all. The richness of the hinted at back story and emotional depth into which you sweep us is incredible, spellbinding and all too addictive. It is going to be very hard waiting for the next chapter, but thank you so very much for this one.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Awesome story! Nice job building up to the inevitable Aya-is-Schwarz conclusion; it had me wondering. Can't wait till the next chappie! :P
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 03:10 EST
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Great stuff. Tense and vivid. Nice insights into the way Aya's mind works. Yohji, as ever, a delight. Can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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Reviewed By: RS On: March 08, 2007 00:59 EST
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Oooohhhh, very, *very* nice, the best chapter yet, nice sidebar dialogue (Omi: "if we're still alive tomorrow we can talk about team dynamics"). Can't wait to find out what's up with Manx and I'm *really* dying to know exactly how Aya made Crawford beg. More soon, please ???
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 18:38 EST
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heh...i always wondered where aya got his multiweapon training--like shooting down helicopters with a gatling gun (or whatever) mounted on the back of a jeep. the only training ever mentioned is katana training with shion in sendai. in fact, i've always wondered about ken's and yohji's training, as well. i mean, did kritiker force those weapons on them, or did they voluntarily choose them? did yohji do a lot of yo-yo-ing as a child? useless stuff that occupies my brainpan. i digress, though. aya and the quelling of the inner turmoil while outwardly always appearing cold and disdainful, professional...that was great. aya's all worried, and yet he seems like he's mastered the weapon. how can you feel like a part of the weapon if you haven't mastered it? got the guy right between the eyes, too. he and farf should have fierce celebratory sex. no? damn. you write so well, all your stuff is such a treat to read. i friended you on lj, btw. i'm not on a lot these days, but just so you know.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 07:12 EST
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Damn it's a little weird to see Aya worked up and not just cool and proficient. But still kudos on the character development! Can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've been so looking forward to your return to this story and you sure didn't disappoint! I love the character interaction, Aya's getting into the necessary zone to take the shot, his and Yohji's mirror feelings about the uniform -- particularly as it applies to the other, Aya's stray thoughts about Crawford and anxiety - and what the thoughts and emotions reveal. All that in a tense, suspenseful setting. Wonderful!
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