Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 00:53 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a pretty good story. I can't believe no one has left a review. It's unfortunate that many people read a story then chose not to leave a review. Leaving a few words of critique is a small price to pay for a good tale. Good story but you have it as completed. Obviously this tale is not done. You have to finish it, really. Even if this is the only review you receive, finish your story for the self satifaction of just doing it. Also noticed a few typos. Nothing major that takes away from the telling but if you can get a good beta she/he can help you catch thoes minor errors. Good writing you certainly have the talent. Again I hope you find the desire to pick up this story I would like to know how you end it.
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