| "Love Hinata" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Mic123 On: October 06, 2017 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see
what happens next. Can't just leave it here.
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Reviewed By: RyoTheSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 20:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow thats something you dont see everyday. Hey! Don't let this die! It's a good story!
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Reviewed By: x2501 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A strange little thing, but i like strange so update quickly :)
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Reviewed By: ShadowFox0 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 01:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok that was rather odd, but not in a bad way I suppose. It can be strange to read, which of course you were going for with such an obviously original idea. You kind of skipped the details explaining the exact way he ended where he did, but they were most likely useless facts you didn't need to trouble yourself with. I will say it does seem to be rather...fragmented in some areas, but nothing that completely breaks down the structure of the story. It provides a nice degree of detail, hentai, satisfaction, and oddities that all come together through your writing style. I still say your Fate/Stay Night one had the best overall enjoyment even if my review scoring doesn't say the same, but this one was great all the same. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: samster On: January 16, 2007 19:42 PST
Comment/Review:
odd story but still goood update soon please i want to see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: TuryScrema On: November 15, 2006 18:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm... huh.... I mean..... well...... I guess....... right.
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Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: angelicdhampir2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 00:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say this was a pretty odd fic, but I like it! Hope you'll continue it.
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Reviewed By: Keitaro_urishima On: October 29, 2006 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! That has got to be the most original lemon ive ever read! (Not counting the ones that make absolutely no sense in grammar and spelling)
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