| "The Protector of Her Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_crazy_fan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great!! yay! cant wait for next chappy! you are doing great on this story!! update soon! plz?!?!
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Title: Lady Sango chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eep! Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru have to meet. Wonder how that will go down. And Miroku and Sango meet! Like another reviewer said it's cool how you tied how the anime/manga/original story goes and twisted it around to make this. Something that confused me is how come it's like medievel (sp?) times rather than Japanese medievel times? That's how I picture it anyways. No talk about kimono's. Though I have to admit the style of dresses you did describe seem more original that it's not totally like medievel times. But that's why it's a fantasy world. But they get their own inspiration also from English medievel times rather than something original or mixed. Ah well still such a wonderful story that I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love how fast you update too. I hope you never abandon this fanfic. I want to read every single thing that happens from here on out. The jealousies and love and Kagome and Inuyasha being together. Please! So update when you can! I'll be sure to be back writing reviews for the chapters..just like now though they might be piled together cause I use dial up and can't be on and I work and read the chapters off my cell phone. (thank you mediaminer for not being like fanfiction . net otherwise I wouldn't be able to read off my cell). Mobile fanfics lol. So when I can get on and depending on how many chapters there are is how many reviews I'll be sending ^.^ Want to keep constant with one review per chapter (exclude the first one lol cause I accidently sent it twice). So take care and can't wait to read more! Till then!
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Title: First move chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku *twitch* he wants to marry Kagome? Luckily they don't know he's behind everything otherwise Inu would kill him but I guess when he saves Kagome and comes back and sees Naraku and his intentions he won't be happy for that reason and not because he knows it was Naraku's plot. Still that's an interesting development. Dude that's so not cool. He wants to marry her to get the jewel? I hope Inuyasha saves her....*slumps head on tabletop*
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Title: Changed chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is sweet but bleh. The start of her capture and the end of the sweet moments between them (for now). But everything else leading up to it was so nice. Dancing and gazing into each other's eyes. I couldn't help but picture it so clearly in my mind in the anime way (sorta like Sailor Moon where they have the twinkling bubbles and colorful backgrounds around them). His words too! Of course Kagome is gonna fall for him!
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Title: Chivalry chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always need them to get sick or on the verge of death before you discover how you feel about them. It's so sweet. It almost reminds me of the anime but since Kagome was almost dying of course he was more desperate than in the anime. But it's still so cute. I just keep swooning remembering. lol Dang wish there were guys like Inu around here.
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Title: Life and Death chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol now I know why I was logged off. I deleted the cookies cause my download was uhhh downloading cause since I have dial up it does that sometimes. Had to start fresh. Anyways it was cute "Right now all I care about is Kagome!" so cute. He's falling falling in love! (second word intentional)
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Title: Understanding chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome1 On: January 10, 2007 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm mediminer logged me off...Odd..It's still me reviewing every chapter but I was logged off before I knew it. Anyways I really liked this chapter when I read it the first time (lol went and read it again) cause I really like the part where Inuyasha breaks the arrow in his hand when Kagome says about being in another man's bed. Like he imagined it and it made him so mad and jealous he snapped the arrow. And he hasn't even realized he's in love with her yet! lol But something I noticed is that you called it the plague. I might be ignorant on what I remember learning from hisory class (was NOT my favorite subject) but I think they only called it the black death back then didn't they? People in the future called the plague cause since it spread so fast...I dunno I may be wrong lol. I tend to be sometimes and this might be one of them. Good thing though they have demons and good herbs unlike the real life past or else Kagome would have died.
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Title: Ignorance chapter
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I should have titled my reviews for the chapters I was talking about. D'oh. Oh well...It's easy to figure out either way. But you know (or not lol sorry) this chapter sorta reminded me of what my friend used to accuse me of in the past (and probably still would if I mentioned it) about how I am naive and live in my own little world where I think it can be easy to fix. Kagome sorta has this here too but then again how can it be so hard? That jerk is taking money that should go to help the needy and using it on himself! It sorta reminds me of movie stars and singers grr. Not all like what Oprah recently did for those girls in Africa but others like Paris and Britney and all those alcoholic ones like Lohan and Nicole Richie wasting their money away on booze and parties and expensive dresses and weeping that their loves are stupid (probably Britney with her stupid break up with Kevin who is also a stupid self centered jerk). They should just use the money to help the poor like Kagome wants to rather than spend it on petty things and make themselves feel worse. Ugh lifes ironies. So stupid. And my friend would probably accuse me right now if he knew I was saying these things.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always comparing her to Kikyou. Lol. Well least she's stirring those feelings. Which reminds me...forgot to write about the whole Kikyou thing. Just makes me mad how she can say those things to his face like she did. Some lady she is. Acting all innocent and leading him on only to dump him. And miroku makes his entrance. Lol Inu finally showing some jealousy!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok Sesshoumaru seems a little scared of Inuyasha when he hears that he became the protector of the princess. I wonder if he really is or if he's just remembering. Cause if he is somehow I dunno it sorta seems OOC but then again it sorta doesn't. As if Sesshoumaru knows how powerful Inuyasha can be. But then again maybe it happened differently than I'm imagining it. Sesshoumaru would never be afraid of Inu lol.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You actually had me a little fooled with how they saw each other and were like "s/he's beautiful" and then when they meet they're at each other's throat later. I kinda though they'd at least still blush with each other but then again it was more believable that they fight rather than keep judging each other based on looks alone and fall in love. Lots of fanfic's seem to be that way and they don't describe how they fall in love based on their personalities. It isn't until they are together that they seem to be in love for who they are. It's just so jumbled. x.x But yours is written where they fall for each other based on personality since Inuyasha isn't constantly blushing over her looks except when he describes her smile but that's also sorta a personality thing because only someone with a kind soul can smile like Kagome. Bleh hope this doesn't make me seem like a guy. People confuse me for one because my name starts with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, even though they didn't really meet at the tournament it was still a fun chapter to read. That's how good you're writing is :D
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Title: uhh
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol oops double posted that last review. Well it still counts as only for chapter one though I realized this isn't like fanfiction . net where you write a review for every chapter. Oh well I want to write a review for every chapter. This story for being so good doesn't seem to have a lot of reviews. Needs more publicity. This story is just too good to not review every chapter for *ahem* sorry sound a little obsessed there lol
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tried writing a review with my cell but because of the spam filter it wouldn't let me so I logged onto the computer and decided to do it. Which is good considering I wanted to write a review for every chapter even though I already read up to the current chapter. The story is just that good! I really liked it.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Inuyasha-loves-Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tried writing a review with my cell but because of the spam filter it wouldn't let me so I logged onto the computer and decided to do it. Which is good considering I wanted to write a review for every chapter even though I already read up to the current chapter. The story is just that good! I really liked it.
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