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Reviewed By: GogoPenguin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an interesting story~ Can stop reading it! I wonder what will happen later on? Is Kenshin in love with Kaoru in the first place? Please please please update soon!! I can't wait~~
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Reviewed By: xJediJainax On: October 23, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just looked at Chapter 4 both here and at ff.net. Both versions are the same, but I was wondering if you meant to have a lemon in that chapter and left it out or was that intentional?
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Reviewed By: MEGANHARU On: October 21, 2006 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! You should allow anonymous reviewer in fanfiction. I don't have an account there so I'm leaving my review here. Frankly, mediaminer irks me. I don't usually visit this site, but I'm making an exception for you. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: neechee21 On: October 21, 2006 11:41 CDT
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ohohoh...naughty naughty ;) please update soon. are they gonna fall in love? who falls first? cant wait to find out!
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