| "First Love" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: Boondock_killher On: September 09, 2009 04:32 CDT
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Hey continue this please! Its fuckin great!
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 10:11 CDT
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I loved the story ,,your a great writer I can't wait to see what happens next,it is so great,it had me blushing lol loved it
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 09:40 CDT
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I'm super super glad you updated!!!! THis was an awesome story before and now it's getting even better. one thing I'd like to say is to add a bit more detail to your chapters. Sights, smells, sounds, whatever, kay? That's what makes this a nine and not a ten. ^^ I hope for more soon!!!
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Title: KawaiiKekeChanNLI
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 12:26 CDT
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Ooooh! The plot thickens! The anticipation is building!! Kouga-kun is so naughty to ambush Kagome when she's visiting her family! I hope Yoko finds out in time! (or not...i love kouga-kun!!)I can't wait for the next chappy! I loved this one so much, great work!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you HAVE to update soon!! i freaking love this fic!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! LIKE MAYBE MY BIRTHDAY! its on april 30th! lol please?! that would be the best birthday present ever!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 02:38 CDT
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Oh NO No nO No...whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....T-T.....sigh* to be completely honest though I had a feeling something like this was going to happen but I didn't think Leiko was going to be the reason....I thought that the King guy was going to be staking out her home waiting for her but now I find out that its Kogas fault its all going to happen.....will the King really kill Kaogme....will Ai be able to protect Kagome....and what of Youko's home will it be destroyed?............I'm so worried...............I'm so glad that your updateing again though It really makes me so happy I hope you continue because I got to see what happens I really really want to...../O-O\.....X3..................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 22:20 CDT
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oh oh This cannot be good. Koga is going to capture Kagome!! Yoko why did he have to leave just when they were getting so close> update soon
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 00:18 CDT
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OMG my self You know how many e-mail I get, because of my stupid scholarship search...about 20 if I'm luck its that low....and not only in my inn box but my bulk as well so I miss alot of thing that come in and out cause I can't check that many ever day....sigh....well I finly go though them and find your update, mentaly beating my self up cause I love this fic so much....well any ways I finaly find it in my bulk and I'm like NO FRIKEN WAY THERE WAS AN UPDATE ALMOST A MONTH AGO! so now I'm review to say that this chapter was amazing, I'm glad that Kagome isn't like afaid to do again, what happen between her and Youko. Though I have a strang feeling that this mission is some kind of set up and Kagome may be in danger with Youko not around....what if that guy that wants to kill her finds her while Youko is gone....what if Kogome really is pregnat and is left to be a single mother?...........Oooooohhhhh to many questions...I hope you updates soon...better yet I hope a catch your updates soon....LoL....X3...........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 10:21 CST
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this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: youko kagome On: February 19, 2008 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is the best update soon
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i could, i would put a 20 on the enjoyment factor. Absolutely loved this chapter. Cant wait for the next one. Update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh! There's a lot of yummy Yoko-Kag ness going on here! I don't know if I've ever reviewed on this fic, I remember reading it ages ago, but I lost track of it! Apologies! I love your potrayal of Yoko-his coldness is so god damn smexy!!! I like your take on Kagome too-you make the story more realistic, the fact that she gets scared of her circumstances- we always know what she's thinking and feeling. I feel sorry for her though, because she's in a tight situation- she loves Yoko, but can't leave the camp because she's being hunted, but at the same time, (as beautiful as the Sakura tree sounds!) it can't be much fun for her locked up all day! So now Yoko's away and Koga's on the scene! I smell some drama! ^.^ I can't wait for the next update! You've got definite talent! Concrit wise, all I'd say is put in a bit more decription! It's lovely to hear about the different kimono, but sometimes the story is more enjoyable and realistic when you can picture the place! Once again, really enjoying this fic! Good luck with next chappy!- your new fan!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 01:55 CST
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Great story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 14:27 CST
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I loved the Fluffiness.. so adorable.. Youko is really starting to get close to Kagome.. Awsome Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: lsc33 On: February 17, 2008 10:49 CST
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Very good chapter, but I had to reread the previous chappy to remember what was going on.lol Its been quite awhile since you updated. I was going to delete this story from my favorites, thought maybe you decided to give up on writing. I am so glad you finally updated. I LOVE this Story. Please don't wait so long to update.
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