Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. Good job so far. I'm very interested in what direction this is going so far - the whole Xianghua/Seung Mina (& occasionally Talim thrown in) mix seems to be rather popular among SC yuri fans - not that I mind at all. Back to the review, your development of characters so far has been pretty solid, particularly Seung Mina's. The interlacing of characters throughtout the fic has also been well done. As I said, this is not an entirely new pairing, but I like what you have done with it. Pursue it with a vengeance! Keep up the good stuff, SC fiction of this calibur is hard to find. Peace d('')b p.s - is there any relation to you and (author) The One? He also has fic with the same title as yours, and the structure of his fictions are quite similar on the surface. If I had to make a judgment, you seem to be The One if he had polished all of his skills - grammar, plot development, etc. Kudos man.
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