| "If These Walls Could Talk" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: laramie On: November 06, 2006 18:10 CST
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Nice. I just hope Kagome gets a backbone and dumps Koga.
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 14:14 CST
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Oi, everything in this chapter happened really fast (not that its a bad thing, I'm just saying). I do have a question though, in your version, are Inuyasha and Sesshomaru half brothers or full? I don't recall seeing anything about that. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: whorl On: November 06, 2006 10:12 CST
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I like this. I really do!! How funny was it to witness Rin dragging Sesshoumaru out of the room. And is Kagome mark by Kouga permanent?
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo-Hoo!!! really like this chapter. I like how Rin and Sesshomaru came together. please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: vengeful_vixen8613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 00:28 CST
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Good story, I really enjoyed it. I want more. I'm new to writing fanfics too. If you're still looking for a beta, I would glad to help, if somebody already offered I'll keep reading your work anyway. I was wondering, if you have the time, to read my fanfic The End I would really appreciate it. Thanks. And again great job, and please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I can't wait to see what's next. And I wouldn't mind being you beta, but I will warn you that it will be my first time doing it. The editing won't be a problem (all I DO is edit at work), but I'm not sure about what else should be done. But, I'd love to try. I really like this story.
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Reviewed By: Lifes_untold_stories [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great Great GREAT! This is an awesome fic so far.If this is your first fan fiction than it doesn't show. Pretty please with inuyasha on top Update.
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic and I would be more than happy to beta for you. If you click on my name you should find my email address. Just let me know what you decide.
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Title: *licks*
Reviewed By: A_Kuro_Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-grins- another smexi chapter my luv! And I must say, you gave Rin, Kagome and Inu-kun an EXCELLANT taste in music!XD Keep it up, I can't wait for the next installment! -makes peace sign- Aishiteru!!!! P.S oh, an ur most welcome! ^^ -huggles-
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Title: Hey Sexi!!!
Reviewed By: A_Kuro_Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this so far! You so have to update soon Kay, this kicks ass!! Luvs ya 4eva!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you say this was your first fanfic?! If so, you definitely have a knack for it. I loved these first three chapters and can't wait to read more. I will definitely be reading and reviewing this one from now on. Great start.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and it's really good. I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 22:07 CDT
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Awesome story!!! It's awesome I can't wait to see whats next
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 12:13 CDT
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I agree. I'm intrigued. Looking forward to what comes next.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 07:20 CDT
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hm sems interesting, keep it up
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