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Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please review i'll be waiting. or mail me at anl2u@comcast.net
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Sesshomaru thought Kagome was the Goddess. And didn't you specify in one of your earlier chapters that her eyes were brown, not blue? Ah well not really my business. Well anyway another great chapter and intend to read your next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About fucking time he realized that he loves her. But also kinda bad timing since Kagome is going to end up with Sesshomaru. Anyway awsome chapter and hope that the next chapter is just as awsome.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good but now it just seems like the story got just a bit cheesy. But it's still a really good chapter.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have only many ideas of what Kagome would look like pulling the Sai from under her clothes and Sesshomaru must've had a kick out of Naraku about to get his ass pummled.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that was 'Call Me When Your Sober' and 'Everybody's Fool' if there was anyone that don't know those songs their complete idiots. But enough of that, another good chapter and it was better than the last one. ^^ It was funny when Sesshomaru started to get a boner there. lol.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously thought Kagome was trying to seduce Sesshomaru there but I guess that didn't happen. Well anyway another good chapter and hope the next one will be even better.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol That last part was funny where the pebble actually impaled Sesshy. Another great chapter and still fully intend to read more chapters. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: DarkYoukaiPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good chapter. I can't believe that Sesshomaru cried about Kagome dying, but I guess anyone would cry for the one that they loved dearly. Well anyway great chapter and I definately intend on reading the next chapter and leaving a review.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh oh my please update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 02:46 CST
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I know I have already read this chapter before (8). On another site, perhaps?
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Reviewed By: sheiba90 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 23:17 CST
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I know the song names^^ I love evanescence and I love how u put eachs ong in here to represent her emotions. The first was Call Me When Your Sober, the second was My Immortal, and the third was Everybody's Fool ^^ I feel alot like Kagome does. I love the fic
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, so my night started out crappy cause all I could find were poorly written fics, and when I read the summery to this I was a little weary; but after reading the first few chapters it pulled me in. and I was so glad that the last one was long. the only thing I have to criticize on would be that you have some minor problems in the grammar department but nothing spelling and grammar check can't fix; and try to lengthen the chapters, once to get use to writing more, it becomes easier, or you could find a way to link the chapters together with a filler paragraph if need be. Longer chapters = happy and reviewing readers^^ they make me happy I know for sure! now good luck with it and such! Hope I don't make you mad in any way (I tend to do that some times >.>')
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Reviewed By: gaara252 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 14:38 CST
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i LOVE this story! please update soon! p.s. can i have a cookie?
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Reviewed By: chicke [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 03:27 CST
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY I PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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