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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: horsesrocketh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 21:58 CST
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coninue....or else....j/k but sewiously i wuv teh story!!! i wish the website was real....THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!!!....i actually tried it....just i case ;)
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYS!! 1st chappie! 1st chappie!!! NOW!! Do the next one!!! ^^
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Title: FINALLY
Reviewed By: khmerchic47 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY MAN I THOUGHT U DIED!!! LOL i'm so funny! And that's what i do all the time, eat a banana! LOL! Keep writing! Its awesome!
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Reviewed By: Isabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 16:00 CST
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Interesting. I would like to see whats going to happen. It's very different. Different is good don't worry just please update as soon as possible.^^
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: khmerchic47 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES YAY!!! You have four girls now! Hey if you ever need any extra story lines just e-mail me!! (Squeels) I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE OFFICIAL CHAPTER!!
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Title: character
Reviewed By: Mayonaka Hana Namida On: November 03, 2006 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Michiyo Age: 15 Haircolor and style: Long black hair with red highlights. Pulled into a low ponytail with a red ribbon. Skin: Tan Eye color: Red Outfit: Black and red kinda short kimono that comes down to your knees. Wears combat boots, and the obi is red that's in a butterfly tie that goes to the knees. Wears black fingerless gloves, and carries a katana on her left side. Bitbeast name and description: Mayonaka: a fiary that wears a onepiece dress that goes down to her feet. Long black flowing hair and brown eyes. At the top of the dress it starts off yellow then changes to orange followed by red. And then slowly towards the end turns into different shades of black and at the bottom holds different pictures of animals. On her arms she wears black vines that wrap around her arms. She has the power over fire, the stars, and the moon. along with plants and animals. Paired with: Kenny Personality: Usually cold in the beginning because she is used to being loved then left behind with noone. Used to be suicidal and has the scars to show it. when she gets to know people or people she likes aka Kenney she tends to protect even if it costs her life. she is very friendly with her friends, and can be a little hyper once in a while. Ja Nae
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Reviewed By: TwisterGirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 17:11 CST
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Also, you can e-mail me at x3kai3x@yahoo.com I can't wait to read your story.
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Title: OC
Reviewed By: TwisterGirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 17:09 CST
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Name: Nikey or Nick (Female) age:13 Hair color: Blonde (yellow, like Max's)pulled back into ponytail. skin: creamy peach eye color: bright blue like the ocean Outfit: Sleeveless blue shirt, with black kakkis pants that have chains on them with a lot of pockets.(Shoes) Black vans with blue writing on them, about 50 blaclets on each arm, earrings that hangs down and has a star at the bottoms. She also wears a locket that her parents gave her, when she was younger. Bit- Beast: Shen- Long, a light blue and silver dragon (like Dragoon). Shen- Long's element is water. Beyblade: light baby blue Personality: Really Smart, funny, can be talkative, calm, and can and will get mad at times, but almost all the time she's sweet and helpful. Paired with: Kenny
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Title: You know what
Reviewed By: khmerchic47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 15:48 CST
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Never mind the full demon, but i want to add that she loves to play, fight (Fist fight or beybattle) and loves to eat!
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Title: One more thing
Reviewed By: khmerchic47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PS. Ryu or Ryo....yea she's also a thief and love to chase anything tha runs but is held back by the collar of her teammates. And she's a full demon, but the headband she wears makes her look like a human. She would do anything ANYTHING to protect her teammates. THANK U!!!
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:07 CST
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ps...she's half neko-jin ^^ just the fangs and stuff...thx again ^^
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Title: This sounds cool ^^
Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea so far ^^ Good, job...I guess I'll get in on the action ^^ Name: Sakuya Lin Age: hmm....how 'bout--> 13 Hair color and style: Amber Red, 2shades lighter bangs, always in a high ponytail and reaches her waist when up (she doesn't like her hair down or to be messed with) Skin: not pale, but not peachy, lightly tanned Eye color: hmmm...pale blue Outfit: Hip hugger camo-capris (black/grey), white trainers, white tank (shows off 1" of her stomach) that says 'Beware' in red across the front, and a black vest with 1 pocket lined in red BitBeast Name/Discription: Dramia, big white/red/black (figured out that those are my fave colors yet?) wolf, with bright green eyes ^^ Paired with: RAYE!!! MUST HAVE RAYE!...please Personality: Seems to distance herself, but is always ready for a fight (fist fights or beyblade)not too easy going around guys, she is very protective to those she cares about, she acts happy most of the time, but doesn't know much about her past or parents, pretty care-free. She'll do what it takes to get what she wants and can't resist a challenge.Also..keep her AWAY from coffee...Yea..that's it ^^ If ya' wanna talk email me at kagomepreistess_13@hotmail.com..or find my file thingy ^^U see ya' and thx
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Title: I wanna be in it!!!
Reviewed By: khmerchic47 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Ryu or Ryo pronounce RI-u or Ree-o Age:14 Hair Color: Jet black and always down about to her back Skin:lightish brown Eye Color: Crimson red Outfit: Wears a golden headband to keep out her bangs, a black t-shirt with a red over shirt with the sleeves rip off, kung fu shorts, and sneakers Bitbeast name and description: Ryo-ohki (I know its a Tenchi Muyo name but i love that name); a fox with fire at the end of her feet and tail and a gold plated armor on the stomach and her 3 tails. Paired with: Well, i really want Ray or Max. Personality: a hyper girl that loves to eat and aboslutely loves to play pranks. She's very acrobatic and loves to sleep outside or in the trees like a monkey. People love to make fun of her by calling her Baka Saru (Stupid Monkey) and she is really quick to fight. She doesn't have a care for the world. She was born an orphan and was shipped to new foster homes like each month until she ran away and met you guys. Detectives and cops are still on the look out for her. Please pick me to be in this story!!!! PLEASE!!! Oh and if you have any questions email me at redryudragon@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oj ya i forgot to put that she wears hiphugger jeans and black kneehigh boots
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Tysha Age: 15 Hair color and style: Black shoulder length with blue streaks Skin: a healthy peachish color Eye color: icy blue Outfit: wears a black T-shirt that says `It's not that I'm anti-social I just don't like you` Bitbeast name and description: Sumki; a great blue tiger with firey red armor Paired with (Max, Kenny, Tyson, Raye):its up to you Personality: Tysha is a mysterious girl who is very hard to read.She is cold and heartless to her enemies(kinda like Sesshomaru from Inuyasha).When she's with her friends she seems hahhpy and carefree. Though nobody knows her past she never trusts anyone enough to tell them of her painful experiences. if you need to get in touch with me my msn acc is kagomay123@hotmail.com (i would have speled it correctly but someone stole the correct way)
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