| "Thicker than Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chichiri3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:56 CST
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definitely love the story and hope you update the next chapter soon.
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Title: evil
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 22:11 CST
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pure evil! i hate cliffhangers! ugh god, dont worry about updating ch. 1. It's fine, just work on the next chapter... please?!
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Title: !
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 23:08 CST
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If you dont already have a beta, I'd like to be yours! email at donutfiend4212@yahoo.com this is an AWESOME fic! i love the emotions and everything its just... wow. You can REALLY write! jesus, i cant even put it in words!
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Reviewed By: poornmiserable On: December 09, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you are so evil for ending it there....i still wonder about itachi....is he just doing it to piss sasuke off or does he really care....this is an awesome fic i love your style of writing....actually i like the fact that you made sasuke seem like an ass because it makes his point of view all the more powerful when he sheds light on how he feels and why he does what he does....keep up the good work and plese update soon.....i have a feeling its gonna be sakura who dies by who's hands i'm not sure yet....you rock !!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Reeve On: December 03, 2006 16:02 CST
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Amazing, really your stuff is crazy good! How do you come up with it? Its so full of... everything you could possibly put into the story of a genius! WOW! Update!
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 18:19 CST
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great story so far is there more to this
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Title: Shit
Reviewed By: Darian On: November 29, 2006 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im normaly not into these kind of stories but F*** you can write! Dont stop.
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Mikako On: November 20, 2006 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can feel the tension, its really emotional and deep. I love it! Onegai; Update!!
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Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter, what happens next? ^^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: poornmiserable On: November 18, 2006 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i love you...this is so good i mean i've heard of this idea before where saku marries sasuke and is miserable then falls for itachi but i've never seen written like this or expressed it this manner you are truly a genious you make it so much more real... you had me cheering for sakura and itachi but now that i see sasuke's point of view i'm not so sure any more i swear my heart wouldn't stop clenching with sakura's last night with itachi (i still keep on thinking he's gonna betray her or something)and i wanted to cry with sasuke's side of the story...are u happy you made me feel so sad...i can't wait for sasuke to find out who sakura's lover is...your story is so full of angst, i love it...i like that you write in POV i just hope you DON'T include itachi i feel it would ruin the story, its always good to have the readers guessing... well keep up the good job and i bow down and kiss the ground you walk on cause u are a genious
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Title: Vengeance Written In Blood
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very well-written chapter! You seem to capture Sasuke's point of view very well and that's not a very easy task. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Keep up the good work and take care.
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Title: Holy Hell
Reviewed By: Midnyte_Thunder [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God!!! This Was Freakin AWESOME!!!!You HAVE to Write More!! I can't Get enough! i think Sakura and Itachi would be a better couple than Sasuke and Sakura...Sasuke's just a cold hearted Bastard...but you did great!!!!
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Title: Thicker Than Blood
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 22:57 CST
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I really do like the first 2 chapters so far. I like how you painfully show the affecting emotions and feelings from Sakura's point of view. It is sad to read how her love isn't returned and how she is only a vessel for a baby to strengthen a clan. I hope to see her get stronger as the story goes on and that she doesn't have to have a man by her side even if she does love them. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: Shadowdream On: November 04, 2006 05:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ow boy, Please update your story! Its so... WOW! The mood, the emotions everything... What happens next?!?!
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Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once in a while, these kind of stories got something to it. ^^ I really like your "mysterious" kind of writing... Looking forward to the next chapter!
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