| "Dotless Dice" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tai Kinmotsu On: January 21, 2007 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. You had a way of making the ending bittersweet, and making the reader crave for more after each chapter. Kudos! I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel; your writing style has gotten me addicted!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 08:40 CST
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CRAP Sasuke is going to kill Oro!!!! I just have to say I dont want him to its bad enough they have to deal with Itachi please dont make him be a murder too! The tragedy would be too much i beg you dont do it! Happy Ending Happy Ending PLEEEEEEEASE!
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Reviewed By: Narutofreak On: January 14, 2007 08:31 CST
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OH NO!! I hope you arent going to make him do what I think you are leading up to that would be so very sad, I mean I know the whole thing with his brother is bad but I really really really want things to work out for them you know happy ending kind of thing and all!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 16:09 CST
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Creepy Snake bastard!!!Good work update again soon Please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: AraiTsu On: January 10, 2007 23:52 CST
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Simply Amazing. I love your writing skills and wonderful plot!
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Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 04:50 CST
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oh i forgot to say that i love orochimaru too sometimes he's just sexy when he's being all evil even if he is a child molester. If you wrote a fic with him in it i'd read it.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it makes me laugh. keep writing oh and i love the sasknaru fics. the lemons didnt send me running anywhere. your an amazing writer.
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Reviewed By: xmoonlightx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 02:07 CST
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OMG write more^^ it is sooo good
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Reviewed By: Naitachal666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good. For three days I couldn't get past halfway through chapter one. I just had to stop because it was so damn funny. Of all places, a 'pleasure house'. Too bad I don't see this kind of story more often. I didn't notice anything wrong with spelling and grammar, so that's good. The plot is absolutely loveable. And Hmm...you're an Orochimaru fan? Sweet! That's another point for you! So, overall, I really like it. ~Nait (Hey, I have an OroGaa fic. Just check my stories. Its called Though The Devil May Take Me)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 23:40 CST
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Oh that was so sweet keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: im_afakexx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 22:21 CST
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no...no no no....you have to finish it!!!! please?
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Reviewed By: jjuliajuju On: December 31, 2006 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aswsome. Update really soon.
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Reviewed By: AraiTsu On: December 29, 2006 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I love it too much for words please update soon!!!
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Title: Ch 10
Reviewed By: Iamdifficult (not signed on) On: December 27, 2006 12:04 CST
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*tears* poor Naruto, DONT MAKE HIM UGLY!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!! Keep writin tho.
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 01:35 CST
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pls update soon
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