| "Face in the Mirror" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Mic123 On: October 06, 2017 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow didn't see that one coming lol. Good
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Title: K'enni
Reviewed By: joseph.o. On: March 17, 2010 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OxO !!!!!!!!! VERY unexpected!!!
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Reviewed By: M.I.A. On: July 19, 2009 23:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have to admit that I wasn't expecting that at all. Like the fountain of youth part. It works and makes sense (since I can see that for some reason in the anime) than...somehow building a time machine. Because I honesty thought she was his daughter from the future or someone else like that. Lol, but this was very creative and interesting to read. The only downside of this was just the abrupt way it ended. I feel that it could have contain a bit more details such as after they first did it. Like how the girls reacted, what they thought about it and what happen to them. Or even how things been since they gotten together for those months, and maybe hint a little more on what they plan for the future. I think including a bit of that would give readers a greater satisfaction in this overall.
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Reviewed By: Prodigal Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird.... but interesting :) . The plot twist at the end had me gagging a bit. At first, I had it figured the other way around, but you threw me for a loop. Damn.... I have no other words to add that hasn't been said before. Nice piece of work :) .
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Reviewed By: DBW On: November 03, 2006 13:07 PST
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Again you write very well, but you seem to rush the story alittle too much. I don't know what elese to say but also this storys is alittle crapy, good but creapy. ^^
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Reviewed By: F-1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 03:35 PST
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Hmhmhmhm... Nice to see such an... interesting bit of fiction from you, Hawker. While it was a one shot, I found the length to be perfect in terms of suspension. Highly enjoyable, and the twist made it that much better. ^_^ Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: Webdog177 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 22:33 PST
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you did it again. bitchin story man. i just keep being impressed with all your stuff. seriously every time i see one of your fics appear i hit it at once. keep em coming. Webdog177
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Reviewed By: Godslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree that was one of the most orginal Love Hina's stories that i've ever had the pleasure of reading. But it was quite well written and a fun read.
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Reviewed By: Eagle Ceres On: November 01, 2006 12:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original, nice change of pace... and the nice twist at the end made it that much sweeter. Tastefully done scenes, with plenty of character work... feels like the Sayuri persona can be expanded on if you wanted to, also how the Hina Girls would react to the new girl getting 'their' man (and I'm curious of Haruka's reaction also) Great Job Hawker! +++Kudos
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Title: Unexpected
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 10:02 PST
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Good fic, if somewhat unexpected in the pairing department. Nicely handled pacing and interaction. Your method of dealing with what amounts to a ACC was neatly handled. I enjoyed it! :)
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Reviewed By: GenocideHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 02:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WINS. That is all. Keep up the good work, Hawker. That said, I'll now wash my brain with bleach for having started the snowball effect... XD
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