| "The Truth Hurts...in a good sorta way." Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:30 PST
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another good one. pretty pretty hair... sigh. I want to brush it too. Oh well. Looking for the next chapter. do you write on the weekends as well? I hope so. ^_^
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 21:08 PST
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Holy Cow! I cannot believe that just happened! I so totally would have flipped shit if that had been me! I am so glad you updated and I will be waiting anxiously for the next update. Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 19:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still coming on strong! Love the turn this chapter took! They were due for some contact. Sess' thoughts are still incredibly amusing. Can't believe he's running home for a chaperone. Looking forward to some great moments with Jaken. Are they actually going to get together before she goes back to Inuyasha? Can't wait to find out!!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 17:43 PST
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"Couldn't they stop afterward?" Good one.
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 14:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Kami!!! This is so good! I love it. Please update soon! Ja ne ~SAdie~
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Title: ch 9
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 08:28 PST
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wow, another chapter... you rock! very funny, even your "summary" before the chapter was funny. ^_^
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! Great work, looking forward to the rest of the story!!
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:00 PST
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I would love to help Sess-chan with his hair! He has such pretty hair. InuYasha too. And a few other demons in a few other animes! LOL I can't help it I love long hair. This was a great chapter, and I can't wait for you to update! Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Sasori26 On: November 08, 2006 19:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a reall great story, but why does the status say completed? Its not finished yet is it?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 18:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another great chapter! I don't know how you do it. Can't believe Sess insisting on her bathing once (or twice) a day so he can "whack off in the bushes." This look into the the Great Taiyoukai is going to color my thoughts during every other fanfic I read about him. Can't believe she said no to his question about wanting to see him bathe. Isn't she supposed to be truthful? Guess the effects of the flowers really are wearing off, huh? She didn't even make the observation that she thought he was preening in the moonlight because he really thought he was "Kami's gift to women." Ha! Completely love his reaction to her revelation about the flowers -- "You have cramps. Congratulations." Too, too funny! Darn! Now that I've read this chapter, I have to wait for the next one. Darn, darn, darn, darn, darn.
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 18:22 PST
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Maybe I'm somehow twisted, but I thought this chapter was sooo sweet. You never do what I expect. I like that. This was really deep ...introspective even. Very nice. Thank you for writing it.
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Title: ch 7-8
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 14:08 PST
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I was laughing so hard I had a hard time staying quiet... I was reading this at school with people trying to study all around me. :sigh: Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, okay, okay! Uncle! Mercy! I don't know how much more I can take. I laughed so hard, I had tears rolling down my face when Sess flexed his butt at her. Can I pay you to come to the next party I throw? Because I swear you have to be the most entertaining person alive. What a contest! When she mentioned being from the future and he started to wonder about what advances they might have made, I was wondering if she would tell him they had battery-operated devices that made the man (or demon, as the case may be) completely optional. How would he have taken that bit of news? Again, the evolution of his thoughts and feelings is so well-done. I especially love it that you're updating so regularly. I was looking forward to reading this all day. Can't wait for the next installment!!
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: November 07, 2006 16:13 PST
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LOL.... But.... ewwwww..... I don't blame him. I'm a girl and I would kill if JAKEN touched me.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: November 07, 2006 05:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i am going to die laughing! jaken gay! honestly should have seen that coming, but still some stuff right there. and the whole innuendo thing with sessy, mean but hilarious! keep up the great work, i'll be around to see how you continue this :D
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