| "Won't You Please Stay With Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pandacat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading your other SP/HP fanfic i clicked on you and searched to see if you did any more!!! and behold!!!! I usually hate long fanfics, i dont have the patients. but i enjoyed every single MINUTE of it!! everything was drawn out but not in a way that bored you but enticed you. and teased and excited you. this was AMAZING!!!!!! I must say it got a little unbelievable here and there with how Harry fell for Snape so quickly after being so set on Cho or being a teen. Im not complaining thoughh >< ack!!!!!!! i could not get ENOUGH of this, i had it all read within a day, i sat on my lazy ass reaing it all! hahaha! i cant tell you how much i loved it! sooooooo freaking good..i want to go back and point out my favorite parts!!! but i think my comment is already long and id annoy you xD anyone else contemplating reading this..DO!!!!
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Reviewed By: Krysty On: February 16, 2009 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best Snarry story that I have EVER read!!!!! It is just so amazing and is also very well written! It grabs the reader right from the beginning, forces them to the edge of their seats, and takes them for the ride of their lives!!!! This story keeps you guessing, wondering if Harry will actually accept Sev's love, if Sev will take Harry back after all that Harry has done, and if Harry will finally realize that he Freaking LOVES the man! This really brought out a lot of emotions and it really does keep you reading and waiting to find out what happens next. The weird thing is, I REALLY feel like I've read some of the chapters before.....Only some of them, tho. Others I don't remember at all. As I'm reading, I'm like, "This sound Really Familiar.....hmmmmm....I really feel like I've read this before." But then I get to the next chapter and it's like, "Nope. Haven't read this before." But then I would recognize the chapter after that and it was just all so confusing. Knowing me, I probably read the story while it was still being written and forgot to favorite it (don't worry, this time it is) and so it just slipped from my mind. Anyway, I digress. ^_^ This is an AMAZING story and I am definitely going to check out your other stories!!!! Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with all of us!!!!!!!!!!! “Look at her! She's traumatized!†Definitely one of the funniest lines! *comforts Angelus*
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Title: only just started
Reviewed By: neko_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i have only read the first chapter and except for a couple spelling mistakes i love it! im happy to see that its complete so i dont have to wait to see what happens ^.^
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Reviewed By: Jakky101 On: April 16, 2008 10:17 CDT
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ROFL "Bother bother bother" HILARIOUS LOL.
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Reviewed By: debbie On: January 13, 2008 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU! MAKE ANOTHER ONE! YES! GOD, THAT WAS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO!
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Title: Swearing!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 aka A.J. On: January 10, 2008 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to everything good and Holy, this is one of my favorite stories! I've probably said this many times but you style of writing is very descriptive and makes it seems as if I am right there watching Severus and Harry's relationship unravel and form in front of me. I'm loving it and I can't wait until I read the sequel! Continue writing and you will continue to hear from me!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 19:35 CST
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Your fic was awsome I love it and Enjoyed it sooo Much!!! I would love to read a sequel/.... I will try to read your next fic if it is as good as this one... LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 16:20 CST
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i loved it. it wz awesome and i hope u make a sequel...i'd totally read sequel!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *foaming at mouth*
Reviewed By: Itachi's True Enemy On: January 07, 2008 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*can't stop screaning and twitching in absolute fear* Alter Ego: It was great like always, Zega,but you might have broken my vessel..........
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Reviewed By: diobeckstead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 20:23 CST
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The problem with this fic is you seem to have ignored how horrible Snape has been to Harry over the years. The whole believability factor is lost without any proper rationalization. Character dev is a little on the weak side as well. Otherwise, a well written fiction.
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Reviewed By: Em On: September 25, 2007 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done. as for the riddle. my guess is blocs. take away the first - (locs/lox) put back the first take away the second - (bocs/box) soo... that is most likely wrong but still... it fits. Keep writing and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Title: woohoo!!!!!i :heart; it!^^
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!...this chappie wz awesome...great lemon great evrything!^^...o i'm puttin up a story too...it's gonna b up in a minute and u can also catch it on hpfandom.net and in a week on fanfiction.net...it's called 'Dearest Consort!...i luved the idea of sub!Harry so i used it!...hope u check it out!^^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 07:51 CDT
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Loved the wedding...I really wish I would have been there... Harry's vows were so beautiful they just really flowed together.... can;t wiat for the next chapter...,
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Title: Sad to see it close to the end
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe its so close to the end. You said only one more chapter. This was a great story and I really can't wait to see what the answer to your riddle is. Anyways, this was great. I'll see you next chapter and your next story.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 22:05 CDT
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That was before the weeding..Wonder how after the weeding is going to be... Canto wait!
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