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| "Twist of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 09:25 CST
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Last chapter. Ah, that was a good read. Well, I'd type a long final review but my eyes are killing me and my brain is fuzzy with thoughts of warm blankets and relaxing darkness. With yummy thoughts of LuisXLeon... Or possibly WeskerXChris. Ah, sure why not, by brain's dead enough to conjure that up at this early hour of... 9:23 AM. Che... I should get sleep now... But seriously, you are extremely talented in writing. Please don't stop and continue to cultivate your wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing the awesome fan fiction!
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 09:19 CST
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Chapter 5 - So, as I started reading this chapter I happened to see daylight break outside and then looking at the clock, realizing it was 7:32 AM, wondered, "Hm, I wonder what I'm going to do this early in the morning..?" at which point I immediately reached the part in the story where it read "initially, not been thrilled to be boned by a third man before it was even nine in the morning. But he did eventually come around" and it made my mind inadvertently think, "Oh, well... There you go." Agh. Dirty thoughts, dirty thoughts. .... .. . .... . Good chapter.
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 06:16 CST
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PS: I forgot to add that the flower language made me grin and smirk through the whole fic. Nothing like reading between the lines to make the written word just that much more enjoyable. You are just too awesome, seriously.
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here I have a lingering suspicion that I've stumbled upon a fic that will very well make me enter the New Year with an insurmountable amount of liquid awesome. ^ ^You are currently my favorite author on MM. 1. LuisXLeon is my favorite RE pair plus 2. Luis doesn't die AU, times 3. You write amazing, equals EPIC YAOI FIC! Ah, you have no idea how terrified I was when I immediately recognized the beginning scene in your chapter and my utmost surprise, and pure joy, when Saddler didn't run Luis through. Luis being my favorite character (for some unknown sexy reason), that part in the game sent me to wide-eyed screaming "Luis!! Nooooo!!!!" coincidentally in chime with Leon's cries in the game. Suffice to say, it greatly motivated me to DESTROY Saddler. As such, the fact that you have written an AU where he DOESN'T die already makes you qualify for the "add to favorite author" section on MM. Add to that the fact that you rock hard at writing... Sigh. Bliss. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to read the rest of the chapters. Oh... The excitement. I can hardly contain it. Thank you again for writing this oh so many years ago and for my flaming curiosity to finally have gotten the better of me. Eee!
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