| "The Curative Career of Kaori the Ninja Nurse" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: revival
Reviewed By: skiploompidgey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 15:24 CST
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*dead body rises* Ahh cmon I couldnt stay dead for long- theres more chapters!!! I loved these last two chapters- funny, but you're adding a little subtle romance, LOVELY!! *Inch screams as body is risen* Lol thanks brightens my day this fic- waiting in impatient anticipation for the next chapter!!! P.s. I won't hold you responsible for my death. I die from laughter almost three times a week- hey it keeps me young lol!!
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 17:12 CST
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*laughs* these chapters never cease to amuse me! Gai is the most persistant man I've ever seen. poor Kaori...I pity her...nee! I seriously hope Kakashi wakes up. That little blip is definitely a good sign! hee hee, hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww cool chappie... but when is kakashi gonna wake up... i want to see wat happens next will he like her or not..???? hmmm anyway UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Inch Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 08:09 CST
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*Lokk at skips body* Ha u killd her now thats a feat!!! BIRDZILLA .... *pent up laughter finally released* ahahahahahahaha *regains power of speech* Using lee to dump Gai *pouts* u meanie *Grins and pulls out note book* Not a bad idea though *Scribbles* use cahracter to dump or lay something by another *puts book away and grins whit thumbs up* More please!
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Reviewed By: skiploompidgey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 18:16 CST
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*gasps for air amidst pained laughter* This chapter was worth the wait- BIRDZILLA?! *ahahahahahahahahahaha* *dies from lack of air*
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Reviewed By: Raveia On: January 14, 2007 20:51 CST
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Birdzilla...I find that I have nothing more to say about this chapter. There would, perhaps, be more if I could find a way to describe the extremely loud snorting noise I made just before falling victim to a half hour long gigglefest. We can only pray that the genetically altered birdzilla doesn't mutate Kaori's family.
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Reviewed By: skiploompidgey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeee I'm really enjoying this fic- I love the fact that Gai has simply entered her life through Lee and got this weird obsession with her- the dog thing was hilarious and I loved that you backed it up with Gai's shopping- I can't wait til Kakashi wakes up (my favourite character....) it should be...interesting, to say the least!
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 06:59 CST
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zomg!! This is hilarious!! Now that I think about it, if Kakashi wakes up and falls in love with Kaori, they'd have another thing to be rivals about! haha can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: Raveia On: January 04, 2007 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but sweet. Poor Kaori; her family's so desperate to marry her off that they would even accept a guy with cardboard rectangles for eyebrows. So sad... I would probably close the door in his face...but then he would probably just break it down or something, thinking it was the doing of evil door hinges...hmm... *Returns to stalking post* Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Raveia On: January 02, 2007 19:21 CST
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Hahaha!!! So many things had me laughing. I love how neurotic she is about the icha icha books. I can't wait to find out what happens when Kakashi wakes up.
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 00:07 CST
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lmao!!! This is hilarious!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Very good, I really enjoyed it. Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Raveia On: December 28, 2006 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always wondered what happened to Kakashi after the run-in with Itachi. Your fanfic has helped my wondering greatly lol. I really love your style of writing. Everything flows perfectly and you actually know what grammar is!!! HUZZA!! The only thing i'm not particularly fond of is Gai. Never liked him, although the anticipation of the oncoming love triangle when Kakashi wakes up makes him bearable lol. I can't wait to read more. This fic is definitely going in my favorites! Good luck with writing, and keep up the amazing work!
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Inch Girl On: December 06, 2006 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey This fic is really good cant wait till Kakashi wakes up to see how he reacts. Will he like her? will he notice her? Is he like the rumors say ..a ladies man? Youve got me hooked cant wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 18:48 CST
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really good fic... OooOoOo good threesome 2.. LOL
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Reviewed By: Seth2 On: November 08, 2006 05:55 CST
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oh boy, here we go again
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