| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Title: EVIL
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 04:35 EST
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WHOA! you are pure evil my friend!! leaving it off there!!! o well i love it.. it took me a few days to catch up on your story..b ut i have to say... Jakutso or however you spell his name is one of my favorite charecters!! your story makes me laugh my ass off.. really! so update soon... and i will love you long time!! XD
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Reviewed By: VB On: January 03, 2007 19:32 EST
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If Shippou wasn't already aware that Kagome had no interest in Hojo (hehe I spelled Homo accidentally. Sorry Sugar and no food or sleep is getting to me) he'd probably kill him of course that's if Naraku, Kouga, Kurama, and Hiei don't get to him first. Even if they're not persuing her seriously I doubt any of them would be happy about the proposal.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 08:31 EST
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Ahhh!! Sugoi, sugoi! What a great, long chappy! I loved how you've portrayed older Shippo-chan- he's exactly how i imangined he'd be! I loved this line- "Coming, Okaa-san?" What a spark of genius!!! Can't wait for Kagome's reply and the others reactions!!! I know i haven't updated yet..gomen! But my own love life is a little hectic right now!
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Title: Ch. 14
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 01:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I lurved this chapter, and i hope u update as quickly! YAY! Shippou-ness! :P I adored the whole chapter! MORE HIEI/KAGOME GOODNESS!! I am totally hooked on your wonderful story! ^__^ Gonna camp out by my com until u update! (unless i have 2 go 2 school... :{ yuk...) anyway! GREAT FREAKING CHAPTER!! YAY-NESS!
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Reviewed By: Sasha G On: January 02, 2007 02:44 EST
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You know... I've been trying to resist commenting on the excessive idea and wording borrowing because I've noticed most crossover authors think that's all the rage. But this was just a little too Ookami-chan mixed with Deviation and spiced with Somnambulicious. Took me straight out of the story, and I couldn't even finish. Really. If you think it's not noticeable where your influence is coming from, you aren't giving your audience enough credit. Not to mention, you certainly aren't showing respect for the ones who came before you who already did it. And did it better.
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 22:39 EST
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O_O no.....no..NOOOOOO....damn it....poor boy...well not really....how could he???There not even a couple..Are they??neyahhh!I wonder what Fluffy would think about all of this?...
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG..you have to be kidding....omg..pleaseeeeeeee dont let her be with hojo pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee..let her be with hiei,,it would break my heart to see her with him she MUSTbe with hiei because i will only share him with you and her and Hojo is a freaking bastered...so pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee let her be with hiei.....well besides that great chappie please update soon.......
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Title: Gaaahh!!!
Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 20:31 EST
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HOW COULD YOU STOP IT THERE! YOU ARE SOOOOOOOO MEAN! I hope you update soon, I love your story and read the new chapters as soon as I find out about then, even if I don't have time.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 15:51 EST
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WHAT!WHY THAT LITTLE-!HOW DARE HOJO PROPOSE TO KAGOME!He should be hung,no I agree with Hiei on letting him kill Hojo!I hate Ho-joke!Sorry,couldn't help it,but please let something very bad happen to the pathetic idiot(Hojo).Well can't wait for the next chapter,and maybe you could have Hiei rip his heart to bits(litiraly).
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Title: gothic fuzzies (not logged in)
Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 14:27 EST
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Hey, not sure if I reviewed before but oh well. Awesome really awesome. That last chapter was quite the cliff hanger. And Kagome, gosh she is so naive it splits my sides from laughing so hard. Is she ever gonna get her facts straight? 'Cause I think someone would just fallout from laughing at trying to and poor Kagome would die of embrassment of thinking what she thought. Oh well, update soon! L83R, DUDE!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 13:33 EST
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Oh My GOD!!! i cant believe Hojo did that! and i wouldnt find it surprizing if hiei tourtured hojo for a couple of days. lol its so funny the things hiei and kurama do to hojo. gotta love those sneaky jelious coniving bastards! And u brought in Shippo! i always love when people bring in an older shippo. i wonder how he'll go about ruening hiei and kuramas chances... and the way he teases Kagome is priceless. yet another awsome chapter. can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 10:04 EST
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Oh fizzle! What a way to leave off! Gods, have I told you just how much this story rocks? It's totally awesome, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter, you know just how to leave us wanting more!
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 09:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That certainly was interesting... and unexpected too. Another great chapter, as always. Cannot wait to read Kagome's and Hiei's reaction. I wouldn't be surprised if Hiei beheaded Hojo for posing such a question. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: bluepeach [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 02:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this!!! what you've got so far is GENIOUS!!.... one thought though please dont turn this into one of those "kurama lets hiei have the girl out of pity" things...I guess im just a sucker for the love triangle... but I luv kagome's obvious fear of the three some because thats exactly where I thought (and im sure many people were hoping [me]) the story would go... still hilarious and GENIOUS please write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 02:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update soon!
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