| "Hentai Bets" Reviews/Comments [ 302 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Even Hojo is catching my attention (for once!). I can't wait for the citrusy goodness to come...even if it is Hojo. LMAO! It looks like your starting to set things up for her and Hiei. Have you decided on the pairing? Keep it up! I'm lovin' it!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 14:33 EST
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oo thats briliant. Hiei does so seem to love ta crash everything. and that sneak naraku. convincing everyone to let Kagome think hiei and kurama were doing that. and Kagome setting up Jakotsu and Kouga. lol halarious. o and i do so hope that hiei will kick Hojos ass in the next chapter. if he was that mean to his best friend i cant wait to se what condition he leaves hojo in... another brilliant chapter on your behalf. plz update soon!
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Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 14:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FREAKIN YES! I lurved it, and hope 2 read more from u soon! Very awesome chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 13:20 EST
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ooo so kagome has the wrong idea about hiei and kurama and the others aren't gunna tell her... hmm ill be waiting to hear more soon hopefully
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals and dances in glee* Oh, that was an awesome chapter! I luv it so much, and i hope 2 read more! loved the horny action! ;P -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I have never read anything so funny! I burst out laughing when they were talking about Naraku's little "quirk." I think I continued chuckling for a good few minutes afterwards. I'm really enjoying this story! I can't believe I only just came across it. Please continue update, because I'm definately enjoying reading!
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! How could you end it there....... Oh well. I f'ing luv'ed this chapter. Everything was funny, random, scary(....). Sorry, my mined hasent been working right (lack of sleep I think)so if I spell anything wrong, sorry. Please update very soon.
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 00:29 EST
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ahh very interesting chapter w/ lots going on... i luved it! so now that hiei's there wuts gunna happen?! cant wait!!
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Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:41 EST
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8) WOW! that was soooo FANTASTIC!! at the end... when Hiei shows... next chapter is going to be so absollutly AWSOME!! And then earlier when there all talking about the threesom porn movies... lol Kagomes imagination runs a wee little bit wild on that one. AND THE CAMERA!!! lol i expected Hiei or Kurama to go and ask for a pic lol or at least steal the camera from Naraku... And then the strip spar. that was funny. OO and Hojo. Wow might i say he was a bit on the evil side this chapter. He was fabulous. And very smart. I wonder where he is hiding the neckless, hes just to cocky and evil not to have it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! i really can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:32 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh where to start first - first yusuke's comments about kags & Jaksotsu ... so funny, Yusuke thinking about how the pair looked kinda secy looking and then wanting to go home to Keiko SOON. just brill. And poor kags, I feel so sorry for her, her thoughts on the sandwich action, hysterical. I loved how Miroku whipped out thecamera, perfect characterisation (sp) for him. There was just so much going on in this chapter. u were on fire girl. What with the porno movie comments and then the mention of Strip spar game from Kurama, that was excell. And what about Hiei, whats he going to do to Kurama. He has to get one up on the fox, i couldn't him not get his own back. I can't wait till your next chap, what will your deviant mind come up with. I can't waittttttttttttt. P.s will any more of Kags underwear go missing and what are you planning for her missing underwear. Maybe a shrine in her honour with her underwear on display. P.P.S will Hiei or Kurama steal the camera that Naraku pocketed.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot is it hot in Here? *Looking around for a fan* Update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animealover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bad hiei!!! crashing in like that! just when things were getting hot! :( LOve it anyway! UPDate soon!
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Title: Hentai Bets
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! You sooooo have to update! Please!!!! PLEASE!!! UPDATE!!! Oh, and nice lemon on chapter ... nine ... or was it eight? Either way; UPDATE!!!!
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Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love rit now! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! I'm hooked! You are an awesome writer! I love the night scenes! and the flashing naraku! *falls on ass and laughs hysterically* and i was so surprised when jakotsu was in there! he is freakin awesome! jakotsu is one of my fave characters in inuyasha, along w/ bankotsu, naraku, and kouga! *giggles in glee* surrounded by smexy men... i would love that! *nose bleed* *faints*... why yes, hiei, i would love some of your icecream... XD -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: Bruce n Charlie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 00:44 EST
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i just had the best evening reading your story. i hope you update soon. Bruce n' Charlie
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