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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:dances in joy: Yay! You finished it! :screams in joy: I loved it, and again, your wonderous writing has me insnared within it's wonderous grasp! I love all of your fictions, and hope to one day get up there on your level! :sighs: The storm scene when Hiei slammed Kag against the car, and kissed her had me squealing in glee! I was lyk, YAY! HE FOUND HER AGAIN! And I loved how you had Yuusuke thinking The world is going the hell in a basket Very awesome! :giggle: Well, i hope you get your other one-shots out, and get to finish your wonderous stories too! :dances again: From your loyal fan, Mitsuko
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Title: Excellent Ending
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent piece of work. I have many favorite stories on a number of different sites that are bookmarked in my favorites or saved to my computer for the pleasure of reading when ever I want. I have very few favorite authors even in my bookmarks, and you are one of those few. Please keep up the great work. I am glad to hear that you have not stopped working on your stories, and although impatient, I eagerly await seeing some...any...of your longer works being update, including "Night of a Blood Red Moon".
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Reviewed By: Reltica_Rune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this fic truly as i love hiei/kagome fics cuz they balance together. granted i think they got together a little quick but do to your streak of one-shots that isnt surprizing, but at least you made it good. i would like it if you contiunue this and wouldnt it be interesting if thier was some sort of side effect of the jewel that was bonded to her soal being destroyed. like idunno the jewels power becomes her own, her life is extended something. but whatever i look forward to your new stories as well. after all you are one of my favorite authors. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Shi-no-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, so cute and teeth-hurting sweet. I can see this coming into a full blown story, but as long as you keep posting your delectable Hiei/Kagome stories, i will love you forever, and im sure many others will as well. And im also glad that you got so many reviews, i wish my stories would start getting this type of feed back! {+K+}
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another good one! I was so surprised that you brought Maya into it. And I still just love the "jewel sucked into the wind tunnel and is GONE" idea. I would have loved to have seen Kurama's face when he got home and found them gone! (And found the girl's wet clothes still there!) Ha!! I love your long stories AND your one-shots! Write it, I'll read it. Hope you finish up the "Explosive Chemistry" two-shot starring Hiei/Kagome soon, too.
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 05:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Still like it, but haven't read any "night of the blood read moon" Lately, this has got me craving that...how ever weird that may sound
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Reviewed By: KagHieiLuver On: November 10, 2006 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great job!!cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 22:12 CST
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Very nice! Please do make it a two-sho! PPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!
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Title: More Please!
Reviewed By: Kagomechan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! I want to read the conclusion!
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it! I think my heart just died. I hope you'll continue it because this is a really good story like all of your fics are. I love the plot. ^^
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story. Please continue. I realize that you tend to not continue your stories, because the rate of readers to the rate of reviews are not has high as most authors would like, however, there are those loyal readers who truly like your work, and when you do not continue your stories because of the number of reviews, you are in essence punishing your most valued readers. I do understand your point of view on the reviews. Writing my own stories, I have also seen the same thing, unfortunately, while it would be nice to make more people review, there is not much that one can do to force them to do so. Even threatening to not write any more doesn't work, and in the long run, all that happens is that you stop doing something that you already dearly love to do, and do extremely well. 'Write stories for others to read.'. Please update this story and continue some of your others.
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Reviewed By: darkenedsoul On: November 09, 2006 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amazing so far. you've got to continue it, i've got to know what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. Please continue with it.
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Reviewed By: yu On: November 09, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories i don't offten review unless i really like. but i can't wiat for you to update. keep writing your awsome stories.
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I honestly can't wait till you update! It is wonderful! Keep up the awesome work!
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