| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:11 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 On: December 06, 2006 17:58 CST
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I love the story and I can`t wait to read more so update soon please sorry if I am rushing you
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 On: December 02, 2006 12:21 CST
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So far that was pretty good I can`t wait to read more of this chapter oh yeah I thought Naruto was oing to talk to Luna about his dream and also if your not going to say who Naruto is going to be paired up with lol if you want to make it even more funny have him paired up with Haruka now that would be funny well I think it would be oh well keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 13:33 CST
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So far this chapter is good I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes lol keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 14:22 CST
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Well that was kinda short but who cares it was still good and I do think Naruto and Hotaru would make a good couple I can`t wait till yo update again so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Cheez it On: November 27, 2006 15:47 CST
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I also have a feeling that Naruto will be paired with Hotaru. =p
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 14:24 CST
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So far this chapter is looking good I can`t wait till it is finished and I have a feeling Naruto will be paired up with Hotaru tell you the truth to me Hotaru is just like Hinata always blushing when Naruto is around lol but I wouldn`t mind seeig Naruto paired up with Ami well thats just me lol well keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Cheez it On: November 26, 2006 19:55 CST
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hey keep up the good work....its coming along great! =p
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 10:31 CST
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That was good I loved the part where Naruto thought Haruka was a guy lol and I can`t wait to read more keep up the good work I have sen that name Haruka in another I tought was very good where Haruka was Naruto`s mother and Naruto found out he has a bloodline where he could talk to the animals but the problem is the author never finished the story and I and a feeling that it will never be finished oh yeah the story was called Bloodlines anyways keep up the good work and update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 00:32 CST
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This is a great story to read but I have a question I was wondering is every chapter going to be lke this I mean start a chapter end it then later that day or the next day and update the same chapter 2 or 3 times before you get everything you said was in that chapter if that is the case it is really annoying I mean hell this is a great story I want to read a whole chapter not part of a chapter then wait to read yet another part of the same chapter and wait some more until you finally update with the finished chapter please just complete a chapter then update it not bits and peice of one anyway I do love your story
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Reviewed By: Cheez It On: November 21, 2006 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Great. I love it!! It's cool because I always wanted to write though I'm not good at it. haha please update..keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 00:48 CST
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I am confused I thought they go to the mall and get attacked by a youma and the other senshis appear and helps well thats what it sys in the summery oh well Please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really like this story at first I thoght it wasn`t going to be good because of the crossover between Narto and Sailor Moon but I was wrong it is actually good other than the spelling I did have alitle troube figuring out what you were saying at some points oter than that it was good and I cann`t wait to read more chapters so please update soon
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