| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 14:24 CST
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So far this chapter is looking good I can`t wait till it is finished and I have a feeling Naruto will be paired up with Hotaru tell you the truth to me Hotaru is just like Hinata always blushing when Naruto is around lol but I wouldn`t mind seeig Naruto paired up with Ami well thats just me lol well keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Cheez it On: November 26, 2006 19:55 CST
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hey keep up the good work....its coming along great! =p
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 10:31 CST
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That was good I loved the part where Naruto thought Haruka was a guy lol and I can`t wait to read more keep up the good work I have sen that name Haruka in another I tought was very good where Haruka was Naruto`s mother and Naruto found out he has a bloodline where he could talk to the animals but the problem is the author never finished the story and I and a feeling that it will never be finished oh yeah the story was called Bloodlines anyways keep up the good work and update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 00:32 CST
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This is a great story to read but I have a question I was wondering is every chapter going to be lke this I mean start a chapter end it then later that day or the next day and update the same chapter 2 or 3 times before you get everything you said was in that chapter if that is the case it is really annoying I mean hell this is a great story I want to read a whole chapter not part of a chapter then wait to read yet another part of the same chapter and wait some more until you finally update with the finished chapter please just complete a chapter then update it not bits and peice of one anyway I do love your story
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Reviewed By: Cheez It On: November 21, 2006 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Great. I love it!! It's cool because I always wanted to write though I'm not good at it. haha please update..keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 00:48 CST
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I am confused I thought they go to the mall and get attacked by a youma and the other senshis appear and helps well thats what it sys in the summery oh well Please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really like this story at first I thoght it wasn`t going to be good because of the crossover between Narto and Sailor Moon but I was wrong it is actually good other than the spelling I did have alitle troube figuring out what you were saying at some points oter than that it was good and I cann`t wait to read more chapters so please update soon
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