| "Believe in the Unbelievable" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 03:40 CST
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I'm soooooooooooo sorry I haven't reviewed your story I really am not sure why I never did cause this is an amaizing story maybe I was distracted when I was going to review or maybe my computer shut down in the middle of writing I hate when that happens any way I love this fic Kagome is like All Powerful...it actruly kinda scary....hehehe XP....I wander if Hiei get intiminated by her vast amount of powers......also what about the other two dragon crystals........is Naraku really dead he just seemed to die to easily if ya ask me............But now Kagome doesn't have any hidden abilitiys to use against him it could get ugly hopfully you'll update soon and I will actrully get the notice....T_T...My e-mail like tot send some of my update favorits to my bolk and I hardly ever go threw their....T_T...I was just lucky to day..............Well any way love the fic and keep writing ...........Nyuka.........Meow.
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Reviewed By: MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoyed your story I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Pagos-Hitsugaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH Please update soon. This is really REALLY cool:) What's going to happen when Kagome collectes all four crystals ? YAY Hiei's a papa :D
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Reviewed By: misfits284 On: September 30, 2007 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it and i can't wait till you write the next chapter
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 18:18 CDT
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really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: U_U On: September 28, 2007 03:00 CDT
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Sorry to say though I find this story a wee bit cliched and unrealistic =| My apologies if you find this insulting. I just had to point it out so please dont take it too personally
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 15:45 CDT
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yay hiei is a father yay hiei is a father yay hiei is a father woo hoo go hiei and kagome go hiei and kagome go go go go
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 22:52 CDT
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That was an action-packed chapter! The whole gang's back together now, thanks to Naraku, even though he didn't mean for it to happen. LOL!! Hiei and Kag didn't waste any time and went straight to the mating. A huge capture of the women. Interesting way to bring up a past adventure with the salamander eggs, and having the dragon be the only way to overcome Kagome was a neat way to do it. And she's pregnant! And mad at Naraku! Lots of fun stuff.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 16:58 CDT
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OOOHH!!!!!!!!! this was really good! nice and long and loved the way you added the crystals to it. I cant wait till kagome free's sango it sounds really interseting but i wonder how she is gonna do it! Kepp up the good work! xD
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Reviewed By: EP On: July 28, 2007 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love it you SO need to write more!!!
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Reviewed By: Border Hopper of Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ignore the last comment please except for the update part
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Reviewed By: Border Hopper of Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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this is a really good fanfic. and i cant wait for the story to be updated. so pretty please with a cherry on top, update soon
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Reviewed By: shippofan49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story so far can you please update very soon shippofan49
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 11:07 CDT
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Oh, that was a wonderful chapter!! Chock-full of great Hiei/Kag moments -- just the way I like it!! You had me giggling like a schoolgirl several times. The crystals are interesting, and it wasn't too suprising that Hiei would have the black one, was it? I wonder who has the healing crystal? Poor Kag does seem to be put to sleep a lot, -- but as long as Hiei joins her -- hooray! Loved it when he sat in the windowsill and she used her powers to put him back where he belonged. Ha!! I was just nodding my head at your list of pairings until I got to Yukina/Inuyasha -- whoa! Didn't expect that at all! That's going to be a little weird. Of course, I imagine he's going to be a bit pissed to find Kag with Hiei at first, huh? Too bad! So, Kag knows how to get her friends out from under Naraku's control, huh? This should be interesting. I thought it was a nice, long chapter, and I was really happy to see it! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Stebba_stud On: April 25, 2007 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i almost fell out off my chair loughing so hard it relly is funny and it keeps you up nothing boring in any chapter. update soon and is the way to turn them back maby what they did in the past you know for inuyasha it´s sit and sango is miroku groping her, shippo candy or inuyasha hiting him on the head and him going to kagome for comfort and e.t. if it is please let me know i´m courius
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