| "Konoha's Sunshine" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: SithMaster82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this may not mean much coming from a random person but this was an incredible story. the sheer emotion in the story was enough to make me shed tears. ive read many stories but this is the first time one has moved me this much. again, an incredible story. thank you.
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Reviewed By: tears_of_sorrow On: July 06, 2007 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was amazing. When I read this my eyes filled with tears. Since that almost never happens, I applaud you. I could feel the emotion in every word. You are an excellent writer and I hope to see more of your work soon. A sequel would be nice. Perhaps you could write a story about Sasuke's thoughts on Naruto's death. Or maybe you could write a story where Naruto still protects his precious people, even in death (like an angel or something). Regardless, this story touched my heart. You have true talent, and I hope you use it well.
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Title: sad story
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very sad story. great but sad. though i didn't cry, it did make me want to shoot every person who ever made Naruto's life miserable in the head especially Sasuke-teme. i hope he gets raped by orochimaru. i would also like to damn the villagers to HELL!!!! so now that you have made a fic where Naruto dies, how about one where he actually acomplishes his dream. i haven't seen one where he becomes Hokage.
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Title: WAAHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was crying all over the place while reading this STUPID FUCKING VILLAGERS!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mouse_1500 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 00:34 CST
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Never before has a fanfiction of anytype made me cry. you deserve many gold stars *sniffle...sniffle*
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
must....not....cry...but...just...too...sad!!!! *finaly breaks down in tears* waaaaaa! very good fic nice job *sob*
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Title: That was sad
Reviewed By: newmoon_kyuubi On: November 20, 2006 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sad...really sad..I nearly cried! And THAT is a GREAT achievement! Great Fanfic...try somthing happier
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Reviewed By: DarkSandQueen13 On: November 19, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:trying to stop crying from the fanfic:i really loved this fanfic of all the one's i red this is the only angest one that actualy made me cry i hope you keep writing and for the 9 in grammer it was because you used the opostafy in the wrong place a few times.:still sniffing but the tears have stoped:Arigato for writing this one> Kanome.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 13:03 CST
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-sniff- i can't beileve i cried! waaaaaaaaaaa! poor Naruto. if that ever happens i vow to kill Sasuke. -sits in a coner and countuine to cry-
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 16:41 CST
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--sobbing-- impossible not to cry at that, I tried but it was useless. This was a very good, yet sad, story.
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Reviewed By: torastume(not logged in) On: November 14, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg . . . I cried. Every emotional, and heart catching. Nicely done.
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Title: *sob*
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (Not Logged In) On: November 14, 2006 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you warned us, but I wept so badly as I read this. You did such a wonderful job of writing this *sniff* I'm am in tears at the moment.
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