| "What Is Love Like?" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: anera On: September 20, 2007 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story has this sadistic saddness that draws me in like a moth to a flame. the way you word your story gets me sucked in-almost to the point where I feel as though I'm right there in the middle of it. please up-date soon the suspence is killing me
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Title: ps
Reviewed By: Silverhineko On: September 05, 2007 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
prey and predato is in your fic. You forgot the R at the end. Ch2 towards the beginning. I hope you continue this fic, I dislike when authors don't, unless you really lost the inspiration for it. Reall lovely story. I'm going to hope for a update. PLease email me if you are or are not goining to. I would like to know. I left my email in the other review I left. The previous one was for ch1...this one ch2. Oh..kakai is scared now. What happened to Naruto? and Sasuke?...Ya know you could still make it itachi x naruto. =). lol.Okay Bye and good job.
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Title: and...?
Reviewed By: Silverhineko On: September 05, 2007 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it's been awhile you should continue this story. If you want to that is. While I don't like naru x sasu (disliking sasu for sound deflect and naru fight) a good story is a good story...too bad it wasn't itachi x naruto (my fav pairing ^-^, sasuke seems too revenge seekings,absuer asexual who would never amit his feelings). We'll I might check out other sotories by you. If you wish to contact me my email is silverhineko@verizon.net All right. I enjoyed the style of writing and I didn't see any mistakes. I would offer my services as a beta, but I'm probably not too much better than you. Do you have a fanfiction.net account? (just got one under same screenname,but you have to wait 2 days b4 posting anything XC) Allright take care.
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Reviewed By: intzBLAH On: December 17, 2006 19:31 CST
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will this story include rape? plz tell me no otherwise i won't read this anymore :'( but this is sasunaru rite? =]
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 (4 got 2 sign in) On: November 21, 2006 15:46 CST
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this chapter was interesting. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mel-chan ^_^ On: November 21, 2006 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa Cole-chan! I said I'd review yet again! You said I wouldn't like this fic but HAH! I luv it! And if u dont keep writing I shall hunt u down and make u read my horrible ADD stories u don't like! WHAHAHAHAH! anyway, nice story. and stoic naru-chan is super coolio. feral me likey! ^_^ keep up the good work! d^_^b
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Reviewed By: Mel-chan ^_^ On: November 21, 2006 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya cole-chan! sup! i luvies ur story! emo naru-chan is so awesome! even awesomer than emo sasu-kun..... well they tie. keep up the writin. and as i said. i'll review every chapter! ^_^ seeya round.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading the first part. The quiet Naruto is a change that I like. I really look forward to the next chapter ^__^
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Reviewed By: Shadowed Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. You're going to update soon..right? You style of writing is creative and its not seen very often, but you've sparked my interest. Your originality is great, I haven't read a story like this before so keep on going. I didn't find any grammar mistakes but I saw some transposition mistakes in your words. I enjoyed this greatly and I'll be expecting a update soon. Shadowed Knight
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this one Please Continue Writing and Update Soon Please! I am enjoying this one and can't wait to read the next chapter. If you want a Beta all you have to do is email me at rosekikilola@yahoo.com again Love the story!
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Title: InuyashaNaruto
Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story hurry and update
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 18:44 CST
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this story is really kool. i didnt find n-e mistakes in it. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story and there isnt very many mistakes but if you want i'll help you.
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