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| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: Lovely chapter~
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! As always, i love your fic! poor seifer! he thought it was over! poor hayner! he was mauled! I'm so happy for axel and roxas! i wonder how strong axel is, will he and roxas be all open about their relationship and axel kick the ass of anyone who thinks its strange? can't wait! AngelofMint
| Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 22:48 CST
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Ahhh love it. :D
| Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: January 31, 2007 06:25 CST
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I deem this chapter not-enough-buttsecks! It was nice and cute and gave me a warm squishy feeling inside that indigestion can't get close to. XD Now I demand at least one good buttfuck coming up soon to even out the warm squish factor of this one...and to make up for the near heart attack I got with the key and ring returning scene and how misleading that got! DX *oh the heart attack*
| Reviewed By: Loli On: January 30, 2007 18:31 CST
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THIS WAS THE BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER. :D I got even more excited when I noticed the new chapter than when I opened my presents. xD
| Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 16:42 CST
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I've been going as sennenricecooker and I finally made an account so I can keep track of your fic. Anyways...I was seriously very depressed from the beginning of the chapter to the end of the Axel and Roxas part. But the bandage part with Seifer and Hayner somehow lightened the mood. And I REALLY want to know where this is going. Like... you can say that you'll never put any more smut in this fic and I'll still read it. I'm serious, that's how good of a writer you are. I hope that made sense XD.Updateupdateupdate...
| Title: yes,from deviantart
Reviewed By: next-speilburg On: January 30, 2007 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! More Seifer. lmao. I'm starting too like him more and more. Yay! I hate that there is a slight hayner/roxas. Ew.
| Reviewed By: Hikariryu (reloaded) On: January 29, 2007 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hohohoho!!! On a the richter scale of fangirl squeals, this chapter officially gets a 10, and I mean it (first visitor too ^^) AkuRoku still has a special place in my heart, but I'm not gonna lie - I lovelovelove shipping SeifHay! The interaction between both couples was amazingly in character (especially for having only played the a bit of the game and watched some cut scenes) and very sweet and emotionally touching (I was definitely on the verge of tears while reading Seifer's torn thoughts and disposition). Urghhh, I still cannot express how much I love for you writing this fic in general - *sounding stalkerish now* it really just makes my day whenever a new chapter is posted. Oh yeah, before I forget, about the doujinshi...I'm going to have to face reality, between drowning in despair over applications and whatnot, I think it's time to put that to official hiatus. It's impossible to describe how much I love doing that, especially since it has brought so much joy, but, between all junior-year responsibilities, I really do think that it'd be better to wait and finish it later when the pressure's off ^^;;;...I know, I'm such a sad creature for promising and then continuously putting it off. On a brighter note though, this is without a doubt one of the more beautiful fics that I have come across. It's selfish of me to wish so, but I sure hope that this story gets tons of plot twists and never ends!!(jk). It's been an absolute joy reading The Transience of Memory, and the story only gets better with each chapter. Your fic=(outstanding job)^23435*(fangirl squeal)^4536*etc. Yeah, I think I've wasted enough of your time blubbering. But really, I never finish a chapter in anything but awe and admiration. Lovely beyond words *gets dragged away from keyboard and locked in a cell*
| Reviewed By: Hikariryu On: January 27, 2007 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And then I get less on time each chapter x_X...but superb job on this chapter (though I'm now just dying to see the outcome of Hayner and Xavier). This definitely revived me after a sleepless week for an SAT subject I just took. I don't think it's possible for me to enjoy the shameless smut more than I already do. Anyhow, I cannot wait to read what happens and do, as always, keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: animewhore666doom On: January 27, 2007 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAHH!! oh my god! i found ur fic on deviantart and i was like, holy friggin crap! this is everything the haynerXseifer community needs!! then there was that doujinshi on chap. 7 and that kicked ass! rawr! this story is the best thing in my life right now! so please dont stop writing it!you write so wonderfully!
| Reviewed By: Deidara xD On: January 24, 2007 01:50 CST
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Sorry for the pause in reviews. But, I've been busy =_= I was loving that AxelRoxas lemon you wrote up. So emotional! xD I loved it so much. And the part where Hayner almost got raped.. ah, I felt so bad for him. And here I thought Xaiver was a bad guy =/... I always thought Roxas was a bit emo too xD .. I can't help but feel somewhat bad for Bo, but still.. I love my SeiHay more >3...Anyways, awesome chapters as usual! Can't wait to read more ^_^
| Reviewed By: Manda On: January 23, 2007 21:41 CST
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So, I've been reading this, and i do have a media miner, but I need to remember my password. (god, my fics on here suck though T_T) Anyway, wow. I LOVE YOU! :3 Your descriptions and relationship building are amazing, and the yaoi... (glomp) I love Hayner/Seifer, it's glorius, and your Axel/Roxas bits are wonderful too. (double glomp) (triple glomp) And... I'm glad Bo got his ass kicked, what a shmuck! moving in on Hayner like that! And that other jerk. god, he deserved worse! (yeah!) Anyway, I do like Bo, but Hayner is off limits. OFF LIMITS! >_< (except to Seifer) (myeah :p) And.. yes... this is getting long, so I guess I'll end with this last scentence and a virtual cookie or chocolate bar or something. (virtual chocolate bar & cookie) HA! bet you didn't expect both! ^_^;
| Title: 8D
Reviewed By: Checkmatey On: January 23, 2007 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Akuroku! Dude,lyke ttyl.no. i like roxas an all,but i heart seifer more. i was sitting in my room on the computer and realized: OMG! HAYNER= zell from FF8! It's like so awesome how much they are alike. chya. when hayner was getting beat up(like most fan!girls) i was thinking: Seifer,come save him!
| Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 22:52 CST
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Yay!! AkuRoku is back!
| Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: January 21, 2007 03:51 CST
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Okay, I lie. Akuroku is still hot. O_O Holy crap that was some nice smut. XD Only thing that would have made it better would have been more smut. Though now I want more Akuroku smut on top of more SeiHay smut. The solution? More ghey porn for all (except Bo...I hope he landed on his penis when he got punched down and it's all crushed and painful)! 8B
| Reviewed By: sennenricecooker On: January 21, 2007 01:49 CST
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Haha, I'm so glad I checked back the same day. I was like "NOOOO" for missing two updates, but it's better sometimes because I don't have to wait for the updates as long, I suppose. I only had to wait a few hours for the outcome of Bo's party, I had it easy! XD Anyways, you are really good at this timing stuff. I was like "No, don't rape Hayner." And he didn't, that would have been too much drama too fast. That is one thing I think "gangster-bitch lit" writers rush WAY too much. But then again, I didn't expect this story to be typical. ^__^ And... AXEL IS BACK AND ROXAS LOVES HIM!!! That scene made me feel fuzzy with overwhelming Yaoi fangirlishness... Those were some damn good emotions you played up! So... 'appropriate', is the best word I could think of >< Ok, now I have to wait more than a day for the next chapter.-__- Update soon!
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